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Hi Baby |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Hi Baby, I just wanted to tell you a few things Maybe I will try to sing you song While we relax in our swing. Maybe I will just hold you. Show you how I feel when I am with you. I would not need the air I breathe I would not need the moon To light my night sky If only I had you I would not need the birds to sing me a song I would not need a map to find my way If I could call you my own I would not need the Late September sunsets To have something beautiful in view If I had you I would not need anything the world has to give If I had you My world would be complete and that you can believe I Love you me |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very nice  I enjoyed this one!Kathleen |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Thank you Irish Rose. I know it isn't perfect but it got a smile from the one whom I wrote it to. Thank you for taking time to read and comment. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hi Baby yerself! I thought this was sweet and very endearing, Alan...it wasn't written for me and it made ME smile...so thank you! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Alan~ this was very sweet and heartfelt. wonderful tribute to the person you love apparently so much. aint love grand! take care. amy |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Hi Serenity.....you never know I am writing about ;0) Thank you and I am glad it recieved a smile from you Thank you Aimster...yes love is grand...and she IS a special lady... |
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