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Butterflies_dont_cry
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0 posted 2000-10-15 10:17 PM




A true friend does not offer judgement when you need someone to be there
They don’t give condemnation when you need someone to care

A true friend doesn’t take when you need someone to give
They don’t hand you a death wish when you only want to live

A true friend doesn’t turn when you need someone to see your heart
They don’t plug their ears when your anquished cries start

A true friend doesn’t ask why instead they give the quiet comfort you need
They won’t walk away and leave you alone as the wolves come out to feed

A true friend doesn’t save the best for last and leave you without
They don’t let silence swallow you instead they’ll lend a voice to shout

A true friend doesn’t look beyond heart and soul to see what’s there
They don’t let you wonder how they feel but tell you that they care

A true friend doesn’t need to agree to accept you for who you are
They make sure you always know where to find them and are never very far

A true friend is nothing less than everything you need them to be
They are the ones that are clapping and smiling as you are set free

I give you all these things as you’ve given all this to me and more
I hear you as you ask why.....because...that’s what a true friend is for





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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-10-15 10:35 PM


Holly, this is am amazing show of friendship and it just goes to show that what I see in you is truely there.  You have penned the true meaning of friendship in this piece and I know that Amy will love you for it.  You truely have a heart made of the purest gold my friend.
ThUnDeRkYsS
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2 posted 2000-10-15 10:38 PM


An absolutely wonderful image of friendship and what a true friend should be!  Wonderful write  

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



serenity blaze
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3 posted 2000-10-15 10:46 PM


written by someone who knows...smiles to both of you!
snowpants
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4 posted 2000-10-15 11:40 PM


Hey, Butterflies!  Good to see you around here!

'A true friend doesn’t need to agree to accept you for who you are'

Truly the most overlooked fact about friendship.  Wonderful write!  Love it!

sp


Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2000-10-16 02:18 AM


A true friend doesn’t turn when you need someone to see your heart
They don’t plug their ears when your anquished cries start

A true friend doesn’t ask why instead they give the quiet comfort you need
They won’t walk away and leave you alone as the wolves come out to feed

A true friend doesn’t save the best for last and leave you without
They don’t let silence swallow you instead they’ll lend a voice to shout

==================
well... it takes one to know one ...  
YA KNOW.... YEAH ..YOU KNOW ...
this is A WONDERFUL gesture ..
and a beautiful butterfly poem
love ya girlie girl ...
me

Elizabeth Cor
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Over the river and through the woods
6 posted 2000-10-16 03:46 AM


Butterflies, Amy must be a terribly lucky girl. This is such a tender, honest sentiment. I wish friends like this were not the sweet rarity that they are. Congratulations on your friendship and depth of heart.


~ Beth

tracie66
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7 posted 2000-10-16 06:47 AM


Sweet butterflies
The beauty in this shows the true beauty in your heart and reflects exactly what a true friend is...thanks for sharing this most beautiful and peaceful poem....so lovely to read..well done
Tracie~

True friendship is so hard to find
When you find it never let it go
For a true friend is someone to cherish
A true friend will be there for you
always
We may have a lot of friends but only a few true friends in our lifetime

< !signature-->

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe




[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 10-16-2000).]

Kit McCallum
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8 posted 2000-10-16 07:01 AM


What a beautiful and emotional tribute to a deep and meaningful friendship Butterflies. Such a lovely read, and so very full of wisdom ... excellent!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
9 posted 2000-10-16 07:02 AM


Your halo is showing my friend!  

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

Elizabeth Santos
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10 posted 2000-10-16 07:13 AM


The bonds of true friendship can never be broken
You have demonstrated this in this beautiful tribute to friendship
Liz

Kethry
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11 posted 2000-10-16 07:41 AM


Butterflies,
what a beautiful tribute to Amy. You obviously wrote this one from your heart. Well done.
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

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12 posted 2000-10-16 07:51 AM


ButterfliesDC~
A lovely testimony to friendship.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Butterflies_dont_cry
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13 posted 2000-10-16 08:17 AM



Thank you to each and every one of you.  Amy
has always been a kind and gentle friend,
offering her shoulder and friendship to me
anytime I needed it...I just wanted to show
her that the same goes for her from me.  My
love to each one of you for your comments,
thank you from the bottom of my heart.  



[This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 10-16-2000).]

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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14 posted 2000-10-16 09:57 AM


Holly~

no words could do the justice for the feelings i have in my heart this morning. i extend to you the warmest most sincerest thanks from the bottom of my heart. yes i am very lucky to have such a wonderful friend as you. i treat others how they treat me...and you my dear friend are at the top of my list of closest friends! your love, support, and understanding means more than you will ever know. i accept you as you are...and know in my heart that it is you who is the angel walking on this earth. from day one when we first met...i knew that you were special. the fact that you would honor our friendship and your feelings so openly like this proves that point! i guess what i'm trying to say is i love ya girlie and thank you so very much. you have made my week! and IF ever you should need anything...no matter how big or small do not hesitate to ask. you know where to find me.

take care & love ya,
~amy~

p.s. to the rest of Passions...i know you all know how wonderful a person Holly is. There should be more people like her and all of you in this world! *hugs*

Butterflies_dont_cry
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15 posted 2000-10-16 02:03 PM



Dear Amy*
As I've said so many times to you during my
days here at passions you landed in my heart
with the wings of an angel and as you have
shared your heart through your poetry I've
watched you shine.  I'm only the friend that
you allow me to be and so for you to honor
me with your comments only goes to further
show my point that YOU sweet Amy-girl are an
angel and as J.M. pointed out in your
post...there is another angel that we know
is very proud of you for your strength and
courage to be true to yourself...I'm sure
she's smiling today for you~


Victoria
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16 posted 2000-10-16 02:19 PM


a true friend is someone who is there when you are hurting not just when there is fun to be had..I am sure Amy will be flattered...lovely poem indeed..

                      ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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