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Nate Dogg, the dreamer
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Nate Dogg, the dreamer |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
When I lay my head down to sleep, my conscience falls six feet deep, into a world of dreamland, as my mind, sinks like quicksand. Some of my dreams, by day, by night, are triggered by my happiness but most of my dreams, are made incite, of my excruciating stress. I've dreamed of being a superstar, making lots and lots of money, owning two or three different cars, and traveling to various countries. I've dreamed of God lifting, all of this stress, off of my chest, and ultimately giving me a life of peace and sucess. I've dreamed of reaching mountain peaks, and swimming to the bottom, of the most deepest seas, and glowing like leaves in autumn. I've dreamed of going to heaven and meeting God and Jesus Christ, recieving the ultimate blessing, under a goden ray of light. In the land of dreams, my heart will surely follow, hoping to card and ace or queen, in hopes of a better tomorrow. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I liked this.  Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Nate~ excellent piece! dreams are what keep us believing often times. hold onto your dreams for they just might come true. and reach for the stars and never give up. a wise woman once told me...tis only people who give up who never truly succeed. take care. amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Jhonbus Junior Member
since 2000-10-12
Posts 25Sheffield UK |
well, I really can relate to this one... *ahh, dreams........* http://www.geocities.com/i_love_you_so_much_c/ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Aren't you glad that the most important dream will come true?! This is sweet, Nate! Denise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyoed reading this Nate...hold onto every dream...James |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Wow!!! What more is there to say??? Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Liz, for your nice comments, Thank you Aimster, for your excellent posts, Thank you Jhonbus, for tour nice post, Thank you Denise, for your wonderful post, Thank you Jimmy, for your nice posts, Thank you Allysa, for your nice posts. Nathan |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nate, I liked this, life is not a dream (unless you count the fact you sometimes have no control over where it's heading)but it's our dreams that keep us going. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nate, my friend~ I think of dreams as the vision that tomorrow may bring to fruition. I would wish that some of yours do. Most certainly they will. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Kethry and Marge for your heart-touching comments...this is reason why I think I'll never leave Passions. Nathan |
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