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Standing Alone Outside ! (my 601th post)
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Standing Alone Outside ! (my 601th post) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Standing alone I n the rain, Believe It's good enough What to be, You realling are, But, In my heart says, You will be always somewhere out there for me, I realize , you don't have to space, Recongise you were born to love, It's hard to belive, Falling In between twoo parts, It's hard , It's hard to believe, It's hard to understand , As you are, Standing alone outside, you try yourself , to tell your heart, you really are, you will always be somewhere on the outside of the road, belive In your heart, you are standing alone outside blind and unguided, Into the world has divided in you, It's hard to explain It always been strange niether you're here and there, You are standing alone outside on the edge, |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Finding a way to open doors to come in out of the rain is not always easy but IT IS A MUST that it comes from within ones heart and soul. Excellent write from you and congrats on #601...  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ vandana ~~~ Many congrats on your #601!!! Don't stand alone in the rain, when you can come join us in here by the fire!! I loved this poem, but then again.....I love the rain, and you wrote this so well! Congratulations, my friend!!  < !signature-->Follow your dream! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 10-15-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
vandana, come in from the rain my friend. . . wonderful for #601. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good afternoon vandana, Congratulations on the #601. And it does get very lonely at times standing alone outside. Well written. Bill |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Vandana~ Not easy standing alone...I think we've all felt this way at some stage Great writing Tracie~< !signature--> CONGRATS on #601  Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 10-16-2000).] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written Vandana... I liked your poem very much... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Vandana Standing alone outside - I have known that pain and can very well relate to these sentiments. Excellent poem Congratulations on 601. They sure do add up Take care, My friend Liz |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
you are not alone here, we have over 4,000 members and still going strong! Kathleen |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Wow,Thank you for all your replies!!!!!! |
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