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Heart Entwined, And Captive Soul
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Heart Entwined, And Captive Soul |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Heart Entwined And Captive Soul Lying drowsily locked in lovers hot embrace Tired at last, utterly content to doze awhile Fresh from the surging tides of lovers race I gaze in silent wonder finding a secret smile Oh my! catching my breath, I'm a hopeless case My head lying softly across your naked thigh Entangled in sheets scented with lovers spice You summon my soul back from it's flight on high I know that willingly I'd pay any asking price I'd cross any barrier or at least I would try My heart was yours to take right from the start My soul, a prisoner of your eyes, couldn't fight They both ceded victory to your shining heart Wishing to spend eternity blessed by your light Believing truly that from you they never will part Marsha |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
What a picture I now have in my head. Very good writing!  |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful imagery you've woven into this tranquil vision of love and trust Marsha. It leaves one in a beautiful state of mind, knowing that hearts can be so intertwined, both in body and in mind. This is a lovely piece of writing!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
inot2b Thank you, it's so kind of you to read and comment on this. And thank you for the compliment, they don't in truth belong to me they should go to my special someone who constantly inspires me.  Kit, well thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed this. I certainly loved writing it. As for saying it's a good poem, I think it's because I've got someone who brings out the best in me. So the complments are really for him, and I'll make sure he gets them. Take care Marsha [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 10-15-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
In mind and spirit love shall grow as the passage in lent in the eyes and touch for sure. Sounds like you had a either a nice dream last night or maybe just a wonderful night of sharing your love with your man. Beautiful visions from you today. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mark my friend, Mmmmm most defintely a night of wonder. He really is someone amazingly special, and I hope he realises quite how unique I find him. I think he has some idea, but that won't stop me from telling him. I might as well try to stop the tide coming in as to stop showing him just how I feel. Anyway I thank you, and I'm glad you could make time to read this, I always appreciate your replies.  Marsha [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 10-15-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marsha..... Your happiness shows through on this one, and as a new sister, I am glad to see it!!!! I decided to make you my 2100 post, and this poem was very special indeed!!!  Follow your dream! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marsha, the softness of this is truly inspiring. . . A wonderful picture. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sunny my new little sister, so glad you like this one. 2100, wow now that is an honour, it really is. You know just how much I love your work always, and I always am more than glad for you to drop by. So my happiness shows, well I'm glad about that too, but I never was the subtle type you know. (Comes from being the middle sister, it makes me naturally emphatic, aka noisy) Take care Sven, I'm pleased that you like this, and it's so nice of you to take the time to read and comment Marsha |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marsha~ Great piece of writing...well done Funny how love does that...takes hold of our heart and capture's our soul Wonderful poem Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tracie, yes love will win through in the end. I thank you for taking the time to read this and I am thankful for your so kind comments. Marsha |
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