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Call Her Patience |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 My muse is confused, feels neglected, abused, as I haven’t been writing of late… I’m unorganized, still my muse really tries to inspire, and finally create… She nudges with care, knowing I’m not aware, of the restlessness building within… But she always knows when I need to let go, and let flow from my thoughts to my pen… Sometimes late at night, by the flickering light, I imagine her prescence is real… She’s sitting right there in the opposite chair with a smile that says just how she feels… It doesn’t take long, if my words come out wrong, for my muse to correct and convey… Her method is fast, but her lesson will last, to inspire the words I must say… Sometimes it’s a song that’s been there all along, as I’m writing she’s humming a tune… She bids me to play in her muse-ical way, and we sing by the light of the moon… The words flow with ease, and I know that she sees what a difference there is in my soul… She’s ancient and wise, and I see through her eyes that my writing is making me whole… My muse is my guide, and I don’t have to hide any feelings in words that I say… She won’t let me rest ‘til I’ve written my best, and I’ll write ‘til I do that someday… Whatever it takes and whatever the stakes, there is one thing just lately I’ve found… When I need her most, she appears like a ghost just to show me that she’s still around!!  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sunny oh girl this is sooooo great, and of course your muse is always near, who wouldn't enjoy the company of an angel. An extremely beautifully well written poem, obviously Ms Muse didn't even need to stir a finger in this one. Sunny, your work is excellent as always, and this is no exception. Take care Marsha  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Marsha ~~~ Oh, I'm so glad that you liked this one....my muse will be pleased!!! Thank you for such a nice reply....it is always so nice to see your name, and especially now that we are family!!!  Follow your dream! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I love the muse picture..it is so beautiful..it is my favorite color..and i love the form..one of my favorites..enjoyed sunny1 ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Victoria ~~~ I thank you for stopping by today, and feel free to take the picture if you like....it is one of my own, so I gladly let you copy her! I, too, like the lavenders and blues, and the soft feelings they leave me with!! Thank you much, my friend!! Follow your dream! |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Sunny, a double dose of your artistry...easily enjoyed on this lazy Sunday morning. Robert Joseph |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Sounds like you have a wonderful muse, beautiful poem, any chance i could borrow your muse? I am kidding I too have a wonderful muse  loved the poem. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ RJ ~~~ It is good to see you here on this lazy Sunday morning!!! Thank you for your reply, and I appreciate your noticing my art!! ~~~ brian ~~~ Oh...my muse could learn from yours....as you write spectacular poetry!! Thank you so much for stopping by to reply!!< !signature--> Follow your dream! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 10-15-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ahhh my dear sister of the blue pages, you have penned what so many of us feel so many times. So, may I ask to borrow her as well when mine seems to take up an unscheduled vacation? You know, between family and all. Wonderful magical quill you have been blessed with from your muse on this one. Loved it. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
just when you think that she's not there. . . Excellent Sunny. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Mark!! < !signature-->Yes....you may borrow her anytime you like, but keep in mind she may lead you into some blue territory!! (Although I think your muse is capable of such wondrous things....my muse should take lessons!) Well....you know every family has to have a black sheep, or in my case--a blue sheep, or as of late....a black and blue sheep!! Peace, my brother....... (P.S....I'm glad you are the first post of my new 2100!!!!!!) Follow your dream! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 10-15-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Sven ~~~ I can't tell you how happy I am to see your name on the replies!! I do so love your work, and it inspires me as much as my muse does!! So, you already know that I feel honored to have you here today......... Thank you so much!! Follow your dream! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sunny~ and i see your muse was working over-time in this piece beautiful writing, some lovely lines you have penned here. i shall be reading much more of your work! take care, ~Amy~ p.s. thanks for such a lovely reply to my work. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Amy ~~~ Hi! I'm glad you liked this one, and it is always good to see a new friend at the door!! Thank you!! And, by the way, your work is wonderful, and I only say it the way it is!! Follow your dream! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, I know this one well, lately it seems my muse only wants to speak to me of sadness. This is another great one. Sandra |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Sunny1-Think your muse could come over some time and give my muse some pointers?, or do you ever just loan her out? This was very nice. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Catalinamoon ~~~ Your muse's melancholy is only temporary, my sister.........it will pass, and the sun will shine on your heart again. I'm wishing you peace...for the heart that's at peace is open to real love.... ~~~ Gemini ~~~ You already have a muse that works beautifully for you, my friend!! I know, as I am always inspired from your writings...I believe poets can share their muse's inspirations!! Thank you for visiting me!! Follow your dream! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Hi Sunny, My muse has also taken a break, but now is back at work. I thought I'd stop by and look up some of your work. Right now my web site is offline as I'm reorganzing and doing a bit of housekeeping. I'll send you the "new" link once it get it back up and running. I hope everything is okay with you, my friend and I wish you the very best. Take care and keep writing. Hey, e-mail me once in awhile. I'd really like that. Be happy Michael Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Hi me twinsie...this is fabulous as always...your muse is just a lovely extension of a lovely you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Sunny1, so glad to see you back and in your a'musing' form... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Hi Michael ~~~ Oh....it is really good to see you here again. And yes, I will email you soon. Thank you for looking in on me!!!! ~~~ Hi Paula ~~~ How are you? I will be emailing you soon, also, and for now.....it's just good to see you here. ~~~ Hi Sunshine ~~~ Thank you, my friend......I'm coming back slow but sure!!! Follow your dream! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
a lovely poem - musing about your muse |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A brilliant write, Sunny1. That is a wonderful rhyme scheme and you executed it perfectly |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ Great write ... penned to perfection ! Glad to see your smiling face ! *Hugs* for this enjoyable piece. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Wilfred ~~~ Thank you, my friend....just a little passing a-muse-ment!! ~~~ Balladeer ~~~ Your compliment is oh so nice to get, and my muse and I thank you from our hearts!! ~~~ Marge ~~~ Oh, thank you so much......it's always so good to see your smiling face too!!!, your smile is in everything you write........ Follow your dream! |
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