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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2000-10-14 10:39 PM


~ Of Love And Dreamers~


Dreamers see tomorrow
a distant reality
a brick wall, a hard fall
needing a pillow of dreams
to rest weary heads

To love and dream
with no particular scheme
brings no shame or pain
for somber hearts to endure

True love and dreams
are meant to be moonlit nights
till twilights sun peeps in

A show of smiles from nights that know
secure love and dreams
can make a heart smile
when it's real...

BloomingRose


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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-10-14 10:46 PM


Very wise words penned in beautiful verse.  Superb write.
brian madden
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ireland
2 posted 2000-10-15 12:58 PM


beautifully stated.

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

BloomingRose
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3 posted 2000-10-15 01:19 PM


Mark, Wisdom shared and recieved, thats the key. Thanks

Brian, Thank you reading  

Sven
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4 posted 2000-10-15 02:14 PM


"The lovers, the dreamers, and me. . . "

Just wonderful. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Aimster
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5 posted 2000-10-15 03:57 PM


Beautiful words full of much wisdom
take care.
amy  

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"


BloomingRose
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6 posted 2000-10-18 08:55 AM



sven~ Thank you for reading.

Amy~ Thanks, I did try to cause the mind to use wisdom, even if just a little. We all need that sometimes.  

Robert Joseph
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7 posted 2000-10-18 09:01 AM



BloomingRose, love often times seems to travel that fine line between dreams and reality...your words carry my thoughts to that place. Nicely done.


Robert Joseph


Janet Marie
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8 posted 2000-10-18 09:35 AM


Dreamers see tomorrow
a distant reality
a brick wall, a hard fall
needing a pillow of dreams
to rest weary heads

To love and dream
with no particular scheme
brings no shame or pain
for somber hearts to endure
===================
I know these emotions well ...
like the mystic, cryptic feel to this one
and the touch of poetic wisdom as well ...
knowing when its real .. is the key
a lesson Im ever learning
thought provoking work BR ..
great writing
take care
jm

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