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Jhonbus Junior Member
since 2000-10-12
Posts 25Sheffield UK |
Half of my poems are about "her", and the other half tend to be about life in general, or things that have happened to me on a given day. Since I have only posted ones about "her" so far, I am posing this for a change. This would fit under the "life in general" category, i think. Are you OK down there? down this well at last, someone to help me out They pull me up and now i'm happy but then they pat me on the back and walk on Of course, i fall right back down again |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Interesing piece  Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Jhonbus Junior Member
since 2000-10-12
Posts 25Sheffield UK |
yes.. The meaning is, basically that people can be friendly, without necessarily being "a friend", and when you are unprepared for that, it can be disconcerting, even painful. |
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your_babydoll Junior Member
since 2000-10-12
Posts 13ohio |
I know how this is. a lot of my so called 'friends' do this..and i let it happen. i like this a lot  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
JH~ yes when i read this i got the feeling the theme was about people who aren't true friends. nice poem. take care. amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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