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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2000-10-14 06:19 PM


you can

wake now the dream has gone
and the reminisce fast fading drifting
onto the foggy past there’s no need for
worry they’ll find a newer waiting
and I shall to do the same
but as in parting
could I
request
do you think
I could get just
one more
kiss.

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Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am.
To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight.
-Marge Tindal


[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 10-15-2000).]

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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
1 posted 2000-10-15 02:55 AM


XXXXXXX...heres a kiss just for you...I really like this
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-10-15 03:14 AM


Lucky~
A kiss from me to  
This is so lovely to read...well penned
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
3 posted 2000-10-15 10:29 AM


Lucky~
nice poem! full of lovely tenderness. here's to always dreaming & never having to wake up   if only hmmm. take care.
amy  

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"


Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2000-10-15 11:09 AM


Oh, I liked your thoughts in this Lucky ... sending a kiss your way too ...

Best wishes,
/Kit

lucky
Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
5 posted 2000-10-15 01:32 PM


I thank you girls... Sheesh and all those kisses too.

Thank you all, dale


Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am.
To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight.
-Marge Tindal

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho
6 posted 2000-10-15 01:57 PM


Please don't tell me to wake up!  I was just dreaming of when we ... wait a minute - oh, honey, roll over here, would you?  I've got lots of them here waiting for you!  Let's do it again!



lucky
Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
7 posted 2000-10-15 02:08 PM


Ohhh Baby... That wasn't no dream, that was the real McCoy... But don't worry just a few more and you'll be awake. Yeah, you can take your time it's Sunday.

All my love, dale XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO etc...... etc. yum yum... XXXXXXXXXX



Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am.
To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight.
-Marge Tindal

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