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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2000-10-14 01:30 AM


you sure can load down
three words with meaning
pretty easily.

just being near you
brings out poetry.

you mean only in us.
sure, go ahead and ruin
the moment with logic.

love is never misspelled where it counts.


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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-10-14 04:18 PM


exploring persona again I see...this is an intriguing read...has a tone of cozy familiarity while remaining somewhat cryptic.
Sort of like someone I know.  LOL..hugs, Mike

doreen peri
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2 posted 2000-10-14 04:25 PM


fabulous last line!
nope, it never is, is it?
as always, i enjoyed reading you  

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3 posted 2000-10-14 04:26 PM


great big cool poem here squirrelly one
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4 posted 2000-10-15 07:53 PM


Mike~ this is awesome.  - SEA
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5 posted 2000-10-16 10:20 PM


BSquirrel~
Love it !

'love is never misspelled where it counts.'

What a nifty line !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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