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Victoria
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0 posted 10-14-2000 12:35 AM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Victoria

             Tell me your fantasy, I will bring it to you
           Tell me your dream, I will make it come true
      We can bask in the sun, or I will make you a souffle
       I will take you to the alps and make love in a chalet
              I will write a sonnet, or write a rondeau
           Bathe you in champagne, or even bordeaux
          Tell me your fantasy, I will make it come true
                Whatever it is, there will be no taboo
             Lay you down, give you a gentle massage
                 Nothing unattainable, not a mirage
           I will kiss you all over, you will be in ecstasy
             To the french music, of Claude De Bussy
         I will bring you flowers, from a garden of snow
           I will build you a castle, or a french chateau
            I will dance for you, in my private bedroom
            Only wearing a veil, and my sweet perfume
          Tell me your fantasy, I will make it come true
          Nothing I would not do, would not do for you




A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)  


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Irish Rose
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1 posted 10-14-2000 12:37 AM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

Victoria, I'm part French and I can't compete with this one!  Whew!


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2 posted 10-14-2000 12:42 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Cor   Email Elizabeth Cor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Cor

Whomever has roused you to write this is certainly a lucky candidate  ! I like the transition between elaborate romantic encounters to simple acts like soufflé making  .
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3 posted 10-14-2000 12:55 AM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

Thank you Irish Rose..you are too kind..almost midnight here and i am off to bed now...sweet dreams  

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)
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4 posted 10-14-2000 01:03 AM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

Well i hope he doesnt pick the souffle haa..actually it was inspired three years ago Elizabeth..so glad you enjoyed..  

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)  


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Victoria, pleasantly alluring...expressive and inviting imagery, nicely done.

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6 posted 10-14-2000 10:29 AM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

Good Morning Robert..it seems like you are always awake before me haa...thank you for your kind responses...

                        ~Victoria~



A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)
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7 posted 10-15-2000 06:53 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Victoria--Lovely to want to please someone in this way...you have expressed it so well.
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8 posted 10-15-2000 07:56 PM       View Profile for Daniel J D   Email Daniel J D   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Daniel J D

Victoria
Having a French background (father French, Mother Swiss/French) I found this poem just flattering. What a beautiful expression of love. Reminds me of long walks along the Champs Elysees arms in arms, then home, nights to remember. Oh! L'amour. Un homme et une femme, c'est la  vie.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)
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9 posted 10-15-2000 08:46 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Victoria~

now THIS is inspiration! beautiful lines all throughout this piece. written from the heart...that is very apparent. and written with a style and grace this is amazing

take care.
amy  

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"

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10 posted 10-15-2000 09:17 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

Martie, yes it was inspired and from the heart..thank you for your visit..  

JD Daniel,ok lets give this a try..
L'amour fait le monde aller round..thank vous Daniel. Je suis heureux que vous soyez flattés  

Amy, Thank you for reading and peeking in tonight..  

                       ~Victoria~




A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)  


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11 posted 06-11-2004 01:25 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Victoria I'm glad I came back and found this one...definately my favorite of yours...the kissing all over sounds interesting...funny, I use that phrase a lot...I do lots of kissing also...all over...James
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