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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Tell me your fantasy, I will bring it to you < !signature-->Tell me your dream, I will make it come true We can bask in the sun, or I will make you a souffle I will take you to the alps and make love in a chalet I will write a sonnet, or write a rondeau Bathe you in champagne, or even bordeaux Tell me your fantasy, I will make it come true Whatever it is, there will be no taboo Lay you down, give you a gentle massage Nothing unattainable, not a mirage I will kiss you all over, you will be in ecstasy To the french music, of Claude De Bussy I will bring you flowers, from a garden of snow I will build you a castle, or a french chateau I will dance for you, in my private bedroom Only wearing a veil, and my sweet perfume Tell me your fantasy, I will make it come true Nothing I would not do, would not do for you A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-14-2000).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Victoria, I'm part French and I can't compete with this one! Whew!  Kathleen |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Whomever has roused you to write this is certainly a lucky candidate  ! I like the transition between elaborate romantic encounters to simple acts like soufflé making . |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Irish Rose..you are too kind..almost midnight here and i am off to bed now...sweet dreams A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Well i hope he doesnt pick the souffle haa..actually it was inspired three years ago Elizabeth..so glad you enjoyed.. < !signature-->A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-14-2000).] |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Victoria, pleasantly alluring...expressive and inviting imagery, nicely done. Robert Joseph |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Good Morning Robert..it seems like you are always awake before me haa...thank you for your kind responses... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Victoria--Lovely to want to please someone in this way...you have expressed it so well. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Victoria Having a French background (father French, Mother Swiss/French) I found this poem just flattering. What a beautiful expression of love. Reminds me of long walks along the Champs Elysees arms in arms, then home, nights to remember. Oh! L'amour. Un homme et une femme, c'est la vie. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Victoria~ now THIS is inspiration! beautiful lines all throughout this piece. written from the heart...that is very apparent. and written with a style and grace this is amazing take care. amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Martie, yes it was inspired and from the heart..thank you for your visit.. JD Daniel,ok lets give this a try.. L'amour fait le monde aller round..thank vous Daniel. Je suis heureux que vous soyez flattés Amy, Thank you for reading and peeking in tonight.. ~Victoria~ < !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-16-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Victoria I'm glad I came back and found this one...definately my favorite of yours...the kissing all over sounds interesting...funny, I use that phrase a lot...I do lots of kissing also...all over...James |
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