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Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
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0 posted 2000-10-14 12:07 PM


Changing Tide  


Feeling the tides are changing
my eyes are watchful of what is to
come, in my favor or not is still
to be determined, but a course
has been set.

Is there a master plan to all of
this that we assume is in are
control. Could there be entities
that are endowed with powers
beyond are comprehension.  

Some would attempt to give this
idea merit in order to get relief
of actions or lay blame when the
end does not justify the means, we
our still held accountable.

I would like to think that there
is some guiding  force seeing us
determine our paths, and praise us
for our efforts. Who could answer
this with any authority may he speech
my direction.


By,   Cerenity



"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


© Copyright 2000 Ellen Ware - All Rights Reserved
Temptress
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1 posted 2000-10-14 12:17 PM


I like this. Isn't it funny how we can feel change before it actually comes?  
Cerenity
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2 posted 2000-10-14 03:14 PM


Hi Temptress,

Thank you for your thoughts, yes it is and we think were going to be prepared and were not, thank you again.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2000-10-14 03:23 PM


I am so glad that you reposted this piece.  This is so lovely and to KNOW that there is some guiding force out there brings a big smile to me and even bigger one when I FEEL that force in me.  Excellent work from you on this one.
brian madden
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ireland
4 posted 2000-10-15 01:01 PM


Cerenity, it is comforting to believe that there is some big force out there guiding us and watching out for us. Execellent poem.

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
5 posted 2000-10-15 09:59 PM


Hi Mark and Brian,

Thank you so much for your kind replys to this poem, I wish someone would YELL in my ear right KNOW and let me know their around, I really could use the encouragement.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


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