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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2000-10-13 10:30 PM


A Reason To Be Friends


Two souls who need one anothers touch
to see the others need, before asked
to be needed, and share a cause
to give a gift of unconditional love
to uplift ones soul when the world beats you down
to fill an empty cup, when the well runs dry
to share a smile, to go the mile
to need a hand to hold, to hold with open arms
to dry someone's tears and give a hug
these are my reasons...
whats your's?

BloomingRose


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Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
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1 posted 2000-10-13 10:37 PM


Deb,
Your reasons are simply perfect...this is
beautiful and shows the kind and gentle
heart of a very kind woman very
well...excellent writing~

Toerag
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2 posted 2000-10-13 10:41 PM


Wow! After seeing your pic posted here, I can think of a whole bunch of reasons to be your friend!!!! Do ya like Toerags?....Ya want some candy little girl? Geeesch! Ya wanna get married? do ya make enough money to support both of us?....Awww, c'mon, be a sport?......Seriously gal...nice poem....good thought provoking piece...and when ya can make Toerag provoke any kind of thought at all....ya done good!!!
BloomingRose
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3 posted 2000-10-14 12:02 PM


Butterflies~ Thank you for you very kind words.  

Toerag~ Ok, so calm yourself! lol
Not sure what a toerag is and likely don't need to know. Thanks for reading and glad you liked the poem. You did like the poem right? lol

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-10-14 03:53 PM


You said it all when you said "unconditional"...no more need be said.  Wonderful write.
Sven
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5 posted 2000-10-14 08:00 PM


Wonderful Blooming Rose. . .

Straight from the heart. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


vlraynes
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6 posted 2000-10-24 01:36 PM



Deb-
   what beautiful thoughts.
   you have said it all, my friend.    
   few things are precious as
   true friendship.    

   -vicky


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"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes






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Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
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7 posted 2000-10-24 01:52 PM


((Hugs)) to you my inspirinational angel!
Marcy

BloomingRose
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8 posted 2000-10-24 02:31 PM


Mark~ True unconditional love is the purest a test of friendship. Acceptance is not always easy, but we can try. I thank you.

Sven~ Thank you, yes it's from my heart.

Vicky~   I agree, few things are as precious as a friend. We have many buddy's in life, but few true friends. Thanks for reading.

Marcy~ Thank you.  
Warm hugs from angel wings being passed to you!



Wilfred Yeats
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Wilmington, Delaware
9 posted 2000-10-24 02:35 PM


walk out on that plank - don't turn back - if you're not willing - you're not in love- well said

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