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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia

0 posted 2000-10-13 06:10 PM


To all me friends who weren't aloof
I'm coming back and here's the proof.

Sorrow rains
Across the landscape of happiness
Damping down joy
and covering the sunshine in gloom

Sorrow reigns
In the hearts of those cursed
And cuts like a knife
as no power on earth can save them

Sorrow reins
Where faith is abundant
the soul looks up
and prayers of hope are heard
...and answered.



Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

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inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
1 posted 2000-10-13 07:41 PM


Sorrow would be if we weren't able to read your fine poetry. I'm glad you are back.
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
2 posted 2000-10-13 07:53 PM


Kethry~
Better keep your little bootie right here where you belong ! !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
3 posted 2000-10-13 08:13 PM


Ditto.   Welcome back!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware
4 posted 2000-10-13 08:13 PM


rains- reigns - reins -
you are good - very cool - like this a lot  

Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
5 posted 2000-10-13 08:28 PM


It's a better place with you, Kethry  
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

6 posted 2000-10-13 11:15 PM


Keth... take it from someone whos tried to
"leave" for weeks...
this place is under our skin...
its HOME ...
creative and cool poem...
great write
take care
jm

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
7 posted 2000-10-13 11:18 PM


Parting is such sweet?.....Where the hell didja think you were going anyhow?....I'll stalk you yanno......just ask Balladeer...he dreams, eats, sleeps, and talks Toerag all the time?.....(Like most of the wimmen that have met me)....LOL...and if ya believe this horse chit, ya need to marry me, (by the way, do ya make enough money to support both of us?)...Okay, okay.....just
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

8 posted 2000-10-13 11:37 PM


Well alright!  That's what I like to hear, bold and brassy  
Welcome back, you know one of the things that I love about Passions is there are no doors here, just Open Forums where poetry lives and people welcome and read and reply and just care.  What more could we ask for?



Kathleen


Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
9 posted 2000-10-15 06:13 AM


To all my friends, thanks for the positive response.
Wil, you got it. I'm so glad you understood.

Toerag, does the word toyboy mean anything to you?

Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
10 posted 2000-10-15 10:00 AM


Keith~
i'm VERY glad you didn't leave. seems you and i share a lot in common   awesome piece of work. i am gonna look forward to reading more from you. take care m'friend.
amy  

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"


Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
11 posted 2000-10-16 04:54 AM


Thanks Aimster,
Glad you're still here to encourage me.
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
12 posted 2000-10-16 07:08 AM


Kethry
Sorrow reigns only at times
Happiness reigns when we read your verses
This one struck a spike of truth
Liz

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
13 posted 2000-10-16 07:13 AM


Wonderfully written Kethrey ... beautiful flow within these lines, nice to see you back!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
14 posted 2000-10-16 11:19 AM


O Kethry,
Such a pleasure to see you here....

great work...

regards,
sudhir

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