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While the Blackbirds Sleep
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While the Blackbirds Sleep |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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A rendezvous in the park and white swans on the pond near the canterbury bells in the garden i am fond only the ripple of the water as you cross over the bridge and scent of sweet lavender and a yellow buttercup ridge I will be dressed in black blended into the dark on an ivy covered bench waiting for you to embark I will be waiting for you under the chestnut tree waiting to give you my love to give you all of me just the moonlight on my hair as the blackbirds sleep falling into your arms on your shoulder i will weep if we wish upon a star maybe we can creep into a dream lost forever into a forever lovers sleep A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh Victoria...this is just enchanting |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Paula..so glad you enjoyed..  thank you for reading.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh boy "and scent of sweet lavender!" and then we have the moonlight, and the ivy covered bench, and falling asleep in each other's arms, this one has it all. I can see this man coming across the bridge now! Kathleen |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Victoria, nature sings in the desire of your words...a lovely view. Robert Joseph |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
so tell me irish rose ..what does he look like? haa...just a little hint..thank you for reading.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes I know the place and I will be there at midnight my Love together we will weep and as one we will sleep.. I enjoyed reading these romantic words...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Robert..as long as there is no poison ivy around haa... nice to hear from you..~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you james.. hope we dont turn into pumpkins haa...or least i dont turn into one. haa.. ~Victoria~< !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-13-2000).] |
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