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Wobbly Head Bob
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0 posted 2000-10-13 12:44 PM




My hands trace the empty night
Across the shadows glancing
I move like dark to light
All while I'm shadow dancing
Reality's pains devour
Arms outstretched and empty prancing
She stays with every hour
Everlonely longing dancing
We caress the breeze with grace
And still she is advancing
And I could just touch her face
If I weren't alone and dancing

© Copyright 2000 Wobbly Head Bob - All Rights Reserved
CocoBaci
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1 posted 2000-10-13 12:54 PM


"I move like dark to light all while I'm shadow dancing"...

Bob, I really enjoyed this poem you share and I compliment you on great writing my friend...

Coco  

Wobbly Head Bob
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2 posted 2000-10-13 01:00 PM


Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it, and took the time to respond to it!  
Paula Finn
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3 posted 2000-10-13 01:03 PM


Oh wow...this is great...I can just see this...wonderful Bob
Victoria
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4 posted 2000-10-13 01:04 PM


I love this poem..i thought it was great WHB.. dancing away..haha

                             ~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Wobbly Head Bob
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5 posted 2000-10-13 01:05 PM


Thankyou much, Paula!!!  

Victoria, thanks to you for reading and responding aswell.  Glad it inspired visions for ya!  

[This message has been edited by Wobbly Head Bob (edited 10-13-2000).]

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