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Letter to Sylvie (repost online romance)
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Letter to Sylvie (repost online romance) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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Letter to Sylvie Let me be the shoulder, the one that you need, don't walk by your own now, while your been hurting so deep, went through sleepless nights, with heartpain surround, and totally broken, you've just hit the ground. Let me be the shoulder, and I'll lend you my ear, being someone to talk to, someone who will be near, let me be that someone, that cry together with you, because I really know, where your right go in through. Look over the hills, where the sun shines so bright, Don't stay in the darkness, try to walk to that light, I reach out my hand, because I'm here as a friend, and also as a victim, that's why I understand. So chin up and smile, and make a new start, don't let this pain, overwhelming your heart, rise up and go on, walk straight to that light, climb over the hill, where the sun shine so bright. Charisma |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
this is not a repost, but a ....response on online romance.... sorry for the mistake Charisma |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Charisma- i am so sorry to see that this somehow slipped through the cracks, but i'm glad to have found it this morning.  this is such a beautiful and heartfelt write. "so chin up and smile, and make a new start don't let this pain, overwhelming your heart, rise up and go on, walk straight to that light, climb over the hill, where the sun shine so bright." i love this...such hopeful and comforting thoughts. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ This is just lovely - as a response or a repost or whatever. It sure shows lots of feeling and caring for another. Thanks for sharing and thanks to Vicky for pulling it up so I didn't miss it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a beautifully inspiration-filled piece you've penned Charisma ... all the wonderful qualities of friendship, just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Charisma-- you've penned your heart for all of us to see. and what a beautiful precious heart you have. you have expressed the true meaning of friendship. lovely writing! take care. amy |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Charisma, to help, to encourage, to listen...all of this and more, I see in your words. Robert Joseph |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Vicky: I was really suprised to find this one back on top.....and to tell you the true, I was a little bit glad that it cracked through the lines. Cause I hestitated to post this one....but also longing to let know that internetlove is as real as in real life. many times there are more than 2 people involved, I mean, most people are married. If you fall in love with someone you met online, and that end for some reason, it hurt deeply, maybe more than in real life, cause sometimes you become more than only soulmates. That was the reason that I decided to post it, as a reply on the call up from Poetdevine. I am glad that you like it, cause its really from my heart. Marge: thank you for your kind words. I am glad that you liked it Kit: thank you for your wonderful reply, it means a lot for me. Aimster: thank you for your lovely words, friendship means for me, to be there when you are needed.....and that is what I try to do. Robert J: thank you for your reply.... |
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