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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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At the top of a long list of things I am missing Is that glorious pastime referred to as kissing! Not a smooch on the cheek or a buss on the forehead But a knock my socks off, drop me straight into his bed Kind of meeting of lips - a mere soaring of souls Fusion that completes me; makes me feel whole. Such a fine occupation, for day or all night The softest of kisses makes everything right, Validates my existence, assures me my worth, Pulls down the stars and makes heaven on earth. Caress me hello, touch a tender goodbye Fill me with longing, make me gently sigh Make me welcome the morning, keep me smiling all day Place me in your debt - you know I’ll gladly pay! Make my toes curl, send my heart palpitating And I’ll find you perfect, always fascinating. I long to hear stories of how much you miss me But all that can wait - Come here and kiss me! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow Suthern! I want some of those too, LOL!!! Wonderful description of a "knock your socks off" kinda feel ... ain't it grand? This was a great read!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I believe you have covered it all very well...yes kissing does this to me also...James |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I love it.. HUSG |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
This is an excelent poem. I agree with it whole heartedly. Good writing, and keep on kissing Keith Mullin Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Suthern~ This is simply delightful ! The playfulness of the kiss - wrapped up so well in your rhyme. A fun read ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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jinxed Member
since 2000-09-27
Posts 86 |
oh girl this is one of the most perfect descriptions of "the kiss"........this is perfect .....makes me smile, even if I am smiling from memories |
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jinxed Member
since 2000-09-27
Posts 86 |
ok can I ditto myself....? no there's gotta be someone better to ditto than me and since I have the choice (well I do...lol since my server decided to duplicate me) ok I will ditto marge...no wait...I will ditto....kit....no...make that rainbow girl.....no wait...I just hate making these ditto decisions.... [This message has been edited by jinxed (edited 10-13-2000).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Suthern~ this is fun, kissing is wonderful and so is your poem!  -SEA |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
I'm with jinxed on this one, am sitting here with a smile, really loved this one |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You mean like this????  Just A Kiss I traveled that very first night As if being lifted out of my lull My body's encasing put into flight Resting atop the wing of a gull As our embrace turned visions of lust I found myself lying on a body of sand Feeling so lost in our lover's trust Ecstasy waiting so close at hand Slowly the tide caressed the pier While rythmic kisses abound in the air Rising gently, easing our fear Frequency increasing without a care With our hearts pounding close to their height And rythym matching the incoming tide Touching each wave in all it's might Power too stern for us to forsake Fear hidden beneath each caress Sheltered with the foaming sea Stealing the energy we each possess Slowly taking us where we wish to be With thunderous ripples across our beach One last surge came our way Gazing upon the stars we seek to reach Convulsions passed in their brief stay Surges gone... tide going out Gentle calmness in our souls bliss Loving words whispered removing all doubt And to think this was just a kiss! Mark Bohannan Everyone loves a good kiss and you have penned a lovely longing for what we all wish we had more of. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Kit, jmlee, RG, Der Keit, Marge, jinxed (and dithering, dittoing jinxed *G*), SEA, jellybeans, and Mark - Thank you all so very much! I'm glad you enjoyed (the poem, that is... we KNOW we enjoy kisses! *G*) And Mark... your poem is lovely!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
theres nothing I like better than kissing and its his lips of bliss that mine are missing So I called him up and said ... get over here boy.. and kiss me lips so red short ones, long ones, french ones...you can pick JUST KISS ME FOOL ... over and over till I need CHAPSTICK!!!!!  hey girlie... love this poem.. your ryhme and cadence was perfect but most of all it was WAY COOL to read ya smiling and having fun with poetry and it was a sweet treat to see Marks now infamous KISS again.... one of my most favs cowboy ...  you should repost it ... later-pucker-up-gators jm |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is really good, Suthern! Very nicely done! Denise |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
smoooooooooooooooooooooooch! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it suthern..i know what ya mean haa.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Janet Marie, dsnyder & Victoria: Thanks so much... glad you enjoyed!! And Toerag: That smooch was well worth waiting for! *G* Thankie-kindly, sir! *G* |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I want some tooooooooooooo.......... |
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