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Three Haiku |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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autumn leaves fall soft he remembers the summer September's song plays the sun sets sooner the summer a memory October's song fades a chill fills the air the memories break his heart November's song heard -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
December awaits clouds hang heavy and low soon life shall be renewed. Loved your haikus---smile...like reading them better than writing them. But loved your theme, Sven. Well done. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You did a great job with these Sven  enjoyed them. Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow Sven finally some haikus from you! You can just do anything can't you?!  And I am pleasantly impressed!!! Well written, my friend Please share more with us Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Sven, each one is a gem. Greatly enjoyed. Robert Joseph |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
serenity, thank you for the haiku, they're not that hard to write! glad that you enjoyed my friend. . . Maree, thank you my friend. . . Melissa,  can I just hire you as my personal cheering section? Thank you very much. . . Robert, glad that you enjoyed. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ I certainly enjoyed all three of these ! A pleasurable read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Now you know my friend, these were right up my alley. Loved them all. White fresh sparkling snow New memories are now born December's song waits |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
These were just lovely! the ache of emotion mixed within seasonal changes... a beautiful theme. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
very beautiful indeed. i enjoyed these. I am reminded of the immortal words of Socrates, who said, "I drank what?" |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful! Did ya notice I liked it?  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marge. . . glad that you enjoyed (: thank you. . . Juls, if these are "right up your alley" did I get a strike?  Thank you my friend. . . Elizabeth, thank you very much. . . Ethan, thank you my friend. . . and I love your signature! Temptress. . . yes, but did you like them? Thank you. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I've made a mental note - never to bypass "Sven" again - it has been an enormous mistake - glad I didn't this time. Well done! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ All three enjoyed by me Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wilfred. . . glad that you've learned the error of your ways. . . seriously though, thank you my friend. . . Tracie. . . your response read and enjoyed by me too!! ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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