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Open Poetry #10

What will she think?

Jhonbus
Junior Member

since 2000-10-12

Posts 25
Sheffield UK

0 posted 2000-10-12 08:05 PM

typical story behind this one! yeah, i umm "really like" this girl

and so i finally got the courage to send her a letter. What is she gonna think when she gets it?

So i finally wrote the letter
as i write its on its way
what will happen when you get it
tomorrow or next day

Of course i hope you like it
and like me even more
but i doubt thats what will happen
when it comes in through your door

You'll probably receive it
with your boyfriend sitting there
and you will start to read it
while his fingers comb your hair

He'll ask you who the mail's from
and you'll simply turn to him
you'll smile at him and kiss him
toss my letter in the bin

But i hope that you will read it
and it will strike a chord
i hope that you can learn to love
someone that you've ignored
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If you'd like you can see more of my stuff at my website, http://www.geocities.com/i_love_you_so_much_c/ . Any new poems i add (usually every day) go here.
I love this site, it made me realise that there are so many people like me, perhaps i dont feel quite so alone any more...

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-10-12 08:10 PM

Jhonbus~Welcome!

Oh sweetie, no matter what she says or does, you should feel sooooo good about yourself, what you did takes GUTS!! Way to go! Good luck sweetie!

-SEA

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2000-10-12 08:12 PM

Forgot to say I loved this!

-SEA

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-10-12 10:12 PM

Great poem, Jhonbus! Welcome to Passions! Nothing ventured, nothing gained! No matter what happens, at least you'll know you tried! Please check your email for a special welcome from Passions!

Denise

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

4 posted 2000-10-12 10:30 PM

WELCOME to the best site on the web. Wonderful write from you and I agree with SEA...it took guts to do what you did and for that you should feel proud no matter what.

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