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your_babydoll Junior Member
since 2000-10-12
Posts 13ohio |
its all downhill from here feeling all this fear inside its everywhere...all around me causing thoughts way beyond deep. a love so strong a heart so weak afraid to wake up afraid to live comforted by the darkness.. by the silence obsession..over him over his love over his being wanting him feeling him in my life in my soul its such a common thing to feel this alone, and this afraid the death among us has become almost expected waiting..wondering..who is going to go next who is going to leave who wont we get to say 'im sorry' or 'i do love you' or 'goodbye' to..... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Welcome to Passions, babydoll!!! I enjoyed this sampling of your random thoughts and could relate more than a little! I'm looking forward to more of your thoughts. Again, welcome. You're gonna love it here. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The last lines really grab me... definitely thoughts worth thinking! *S* Welcome!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Welcome to Passions! I hope to see you write more...and more...I like random thoughts...and yes, we're all going to leave eventually...I agree with your words here. |
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your_babydoll Junior Member
since 2000-10-12
Posts 13ohio |
Thanks you guys. this isnt really finished i just kept goin on and on..im definately not a great writer. but i have two really upsetting things goin on right now in my life (one of them much more drastic than the other) and writing seems to be the only thing i can do that seems to help. that and crying  thanks  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
In the random thoughts of our minds and hearts. . . freedom and release. . . Welcome to Passions my friend. . . here you will be welcomed. . . here you will find friends. . . This is excellent. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
welcome to passions, there are caring people here who love poetry but more than that, they support you in it and everything else too, it's a real family and we welcome you! Kathleen |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
some of our best writing comes when we're 'venting' - let it all out!  |
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Mark R. Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 113San Francisco, CA. |
Welcome to passions. I like your writing, you write what you derive from your feelings, so passionate, so sincere, that it does nothing but grasp the readers emotions and drags them out. Great work and keep writing. And again welcome to the family... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
  Babydoll- welcome to passions!! wonderful first post...i look forward to readig lots more from you. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This sounds like depression that comes from grief. Very well expressed. Welcome to Passions, your_babydoll! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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your_babydoll Junior Member
since 2000-10-12
Posts 13ohio |
Thank you all for welcoming me and just for the replies in general it really means a lot to me thank you |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
From one new member to another: WELCOME! I can certainly relate to this stream of thought. Trust me when I say that cathartic writing will undoubtedly help. I'm sorry to hear of the downside of your personal situations... I hope to find you improving soon. Good luck, sweetie, and keep writing! ~ Beth |
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