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Marina
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0 posted 2000-10-12 03:09 PM


Here is part 2 and 3 of my vampire series.  Thanks to Parker for the suggestion and just for you I will work on a witch series!!      You never know......I am even put them in Open!!  


My Immortal Beloved


Without you, I am despair
Come to me from masked curtain
In deathblow, we, the perfect pair
Relieve my heart, and bestow your burden


I offer myself, let it be your denote
Take me; end my inner jousted affair
Sink fangs of ecstasy to throat
Let me be damned, hear my prayer

I am your wilting flower
On me, I beg you… feed
Give me your gift, the power
Implant the black magic, I am your seed

Drain my very essence from vein
And give me mortal death
With transfusion, my life sustain
Kiss me, and suck my last breath

……. My immortal beloved

Marina May 2000


Bride to her Beloved


He was the dark magic maker
A mere once mortal man
Traveled through hell’s half acre
To make her his queen, now damned

His constant companion and lover
Reborn by him to darkness
So many secrets to uncover
His gift given, no less

Love be their conviction
In discovery of Heaven and Hell
A future beyond prediction
Knowledge through his death knell

She rouses through birth pangs
Flawless and perfect, in every way
Hungering, to use new firm fangs
Alas, but soon the light of day

Her mortal body dead and gone
Now she slumbers in coffin
Glimpsed, her last break of dawn
Sleep now, as he has done so often

Awaken…….As the bride, to her beloved


Marina May 2000


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It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley




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Parker
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1 posted 2000-10-12 03:28 PM


Marina, these are great together.... you are one with the Dark Gift.

James

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-10-12 08:24 PM


yes... these rule... and  yes write us a witchy woman poem LOL and  where ELSE
would you post them besides open     hehe
glad you reposted these...
they are perfect for this time of the season
and they are way cool...
later-vampy-girl-gator
me

Sven
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3 posted 2000-10-12 09:39 PM


I have always liked this series Marina. . . is it any wonder why?

Like Parker says. . . you do have the Dark gift. . .

And I for two would love to see a witch series. . . it would be great. . .

Excellent my friend. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Martinque
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4 posted 2000-10-13 12:48 PM


LOVE Vampire poetry.  Great job!!
Marina
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5 posted 2000-10-13 11:46 AM


James, thanks for the suggestion of posting these two together.  I have a "Dark Gift"???  UH....thanks.......I think.  

Jan, I am sure I don't have a clue what James means about finding my witch series in Adult!      Frankly..... I resemble that!!!  

Sven, thanks

Martinque, thank you.


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley



Marina
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6 posted 2000-10-13 07:56 PM


BTT.......Just because it is Friday the 13th and a full moon.  The first one in 17 years, so I understand.  It is also the only Friday 13th this year!!!


dgvarner
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7 posted 2000-10-14 03:41 AM


oh yeah!! these are awesome!  love the whole vampire thing..and your writing is SUPERB!!

hugs,dg



she doesnt want the kind of love she can live with--she wants the kind she cant live without
-clint black

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