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On His Way
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On His Way |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
For my son Wayne, Who is... On his way~ Just kiss my cheek, my darling And then be on your way No words from your sweet voice Do I need to hear you say Close the door, gently As you exit on your own Yet remember that forever This will always be your home Sing loud for me, my sweetness As you stand upon that stage As millions come to gaze at you And the music that you play Be strong and wise my baby Let no one take you in And remember: no matter where you are Its here you’ve got a friend Be humble for your greatness And always keep in-hand The start of you my young man As here, it all began When all is put before you Let the cradle take command And never loose your tender touch For heart, makes you a man No matter how the rose may bloom There are thorns to prick your hands Stand straight and tall my lovely Dark days are at there end And when the wounds need tending I‘ll will understand And be right there beside you To lend to you my hand Never will the light go out The fire never dies It is what makes mother GLOW As her heart is filled with pride Its simple love my angel From inside of her you came You can see it, in her smiling face At the mention of your name Love You....."The Invisible Fan" © tori 2000 If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
ahhh only a parent can appreciate another parent's love...wish you both the best at all you try to accomplish Love one another-let God do the worrying, Rodney |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The love shines in this one... well done!  |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Tori, the love between mother and child...a bond to be cherished. Thanks for sharing this loving tribute. Robert Joseph |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tori~ I'm not even ready to think about my kids leaving home yet...this is a heartfelt poem -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tori~ We give them all we can - and then release their hand - to walk the horizons of their tomorrows knowing we understand. They don't ever forget that we love them. And that love returns time and again. A wonderful write from a mother's heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thank you all for your kind words...  ) If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Tori~ this is precious...words written from a true parent. the bond between mother and child is a forever unbreakable one. i wish you all the best of luck. take care. amy |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Very beautiful indeed, well written and a love very well expressed... and felt. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~What a remarkable piece you've written here. What truly loving words. It's perfectly poetic and it's such a treasure too. Take care now,...of that son of your's and you. *Peace. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Thank you for sharing this, it's a beautiful tribute to your son. Kathleen |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Tori! With a loving mom like you, he has the best life has to offer already! Denise |
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