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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-10-12 12:07 PM


Lily, bend thy head
‘neath arctic breath doth thee lie
to spring come spring soon





Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



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Sven
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1 posted 2000-10-12 12:10 PM


Just wonderful my friend. . .

Spring will be here before you know it. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-10-12 12:22 PM


Spotted grace so pure
tilted head of peaceful soul
in petals serene

natelan
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3 posted 2000-10-12 12:28 PM


*bows*

Sun- The way you placed these words together so wounderfully, caused this poem to bounce softly on my tongue in a way that actually fills me with cheer.  Wonderful, wonderful.

*bows*


Nathan

Sunshine
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4 posted 2000-10-12 09:55 PM


Sven, my constant reader, I am running out of ways to say thank you...

Mark, your Haikus always outshine mine, thank you...

natelan, a hearty WELCOME to Passions!  Thank you for sharing your comments with me...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



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