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Around that corner |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Curls sand-coloured bounced upon your youthful shoulders with dimples that smiled a thousand smiles you were not my friend then, not really though I did notice a young boy trying to blend into what must have seemed like towers of long legged snotty juveniles you were there somewhere frolicking loudly about but, not heard quite often these days with those same smiling dimples, minus the curls I see you, hear you cheerfully calling my name towering over me 20 years around that corner we are friends now I am ever so thankful to know you, finally Dark Angel 12/10/2000 "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Dark Angel, you succeeded in painting a picture in my mind, unfolding with great ease. Enjoyable reading. Robert Joseph |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Beautiful Angel, Yes, yes what a lovely picture, its so amazing whats just around the corner and has always been there, wonderful poetry here, thank you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Angel, A good thought and a good poem. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
DA~ this made me think of my Mom....I really liked this, gave me a smile.  -SEA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree--isn't it interesting how time waits for the right moment to give us friends...enjoyed your poem, as always! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh yeah...that snot face dimpled pain you couldnt stand sometimes grows into the very best thing that ever happened to you... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
seemed like towers of long legged snotty juveniles You got me snickerin there! hehe You know this brings back a memory of mine. A girl who wanted to fight me in Jr. High, and in H.S. ended up being in one of my classes, and we became good friends. Strange how things like that happen, she has since passed on, but she certainly left a footprint on my heart. Great writing angel girl!<*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I need to get in here and read you more often. I love the way your words speak themselves softly...the tone you set and the overall style in which you write. Enjoyed this. Take care now. *Peace. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Just wonderful Maree. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Absolutely exellent work my friend...it's amazing how those you least expect become the ones you care the most about. Well said, I enjoyed! *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Robert, I thank you very much Cerenity, yes it is amazing how you become friends with the person you least expected to. Thank you so much for your lovely reply. Thank you Seymour Glad to give you a smile SEA and Thank you Martie, yes time is is an amazing part of life, Thank you for your lovely reply dear one Paula, indeed he does Thank you!Angel, sorry to hear your friend has passed on. Glad to have you snickering hon heheheeh Thanks for your lovely reply.WOW Spitfire, thank you  Thank you Sven Thank you little Faerie so glad youi enjoyed it "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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roselee Junior Member
since 2000-09-22
Posts 26 |
This poem takes one back to their youth. Enjoyed it very much. |
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roselee Junior Member
since 2000-09-22
Posts 26 |
This poem takes one back to their youth. Enjoyed it very much. |
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roselee Junior Member
since 2000-09-22
Posts 26 |
This poem takes one back to their youth. Enjoyed it very much. |
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