A Collection of Youth (Love Lines)My 1000th post if anyone dares read...

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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

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0 posted 2000-10-12 01:05 AM

Okay..This will be put together from the first lines of several poems I have in a notebook. The poems start around 1991 til 1994 or so that I took these lines from. I'm not changing anything, so it will not be like my normal writing. LOL! IE..not as good I suppose. Here goes....Just something special for my bored muse!

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I'm falling forever.
Love is feelings of warmth, happiness, and trust.
The wind will hum,
To have someone else love me.
The words, "I Love You,
Stare longingly at a face,
My way of reminding you how,
A love taken for granted.
Night,
Bring your lips.
I have no explanation.
Love,
Love so deep,
I can do no more,
If I could not love you.
Painful but sweet,
My heart reaches out.
Whisper your dreams in my ear.

My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

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with you

1 posted 2000-10-12 01:08 AM

Temptress~Congratulations on hitting 1000!!! This is lovely, truly very good. I liked it very much.

-SEA

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

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2 posted 2000-10-12 01:13 AM

Congratulations on hitting 1000 posts and YES this WAS worth reading. Goes to show you that you should never toss out those old lines or unfinished works.

insect
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3 posted 2000-10-12 01:16 AM

Congratulations
On
1000

"Whisper your dreams in my ear"
All the rest are nice too!

Temptress

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4 posted 2000-10-12 01:26 AM

Thanks everyone! So far I am glad you enjoy it. It isn't that strikingly put together, but it does give me another idea. Look for a post where I'll be taking my favorite lines from some of my poetry and posting them. I'm not sure if I'll post them as individuals or try as a poem, but it will be done as soon as I can. If nothing else, this will get my creativity flowing again.

vlraynes
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5 posted 2000-10-12 01:51 AM

Temptress-
***CONGRATULATIONS ON 1000!!!***

    i like this idea...i may have to try
    it myself...just for fun.
    thanks for sharing this.

    -vicky

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-12-2000).]

wayoutwalt
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6 posted 2000-10-12 01:53 AM

this was neat o yuh i loved it all the way through

there's a love title

i loved it all the way through

hehe fun read

Wilfred Yeats
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7 posted 2000-10-12 05:14 AM

[b]Congratulations
on your 1000th

I loved the cleverness

Forgive me If I see it as a
CHALLENGE

Let's go for the big 2000th now!

~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning.

~ Billy Wilder

tracie66
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8 posted 2000-10-12 05:17 AM

WOW!!! I'm glad I dared

These words are so beautiful...well done Temptress
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Charisma

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9 posted 2000-10-12 05:31 AM

Congrats on your 1000!!

well reading your post, it make me decide that I must try to save my lines either,
think that that is hard to do, I have everywhere some lines,

.....I think that the most poets have the same problem.

but I enjoyed reading this one from your hand......

Charisma

lucky
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10 posted 2000-10-12 06:45 AM

There seems to be a couple of pages , missing. Do you have the day before this all happened..?

Ha..!

Paula Finn
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11 posted 2000-10-13 02:45 AM

Isnt it amazing how all those thoughts just seem to fit? Congrats

Marina
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12 posted 2000-10-13 11:24 AM

CONGRADULATIONS!!!

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Victoria

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13 posted 2000-10-13 11:31 AM

CONGRATULATIONS TO YOU TEMPTRESS

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

vandana

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14 posted 2000-10-13 11:55 AM

Congs on your 1000th post!!!!!!!!!!

liked the love lines you took from!!!!!!!!!

Rosebud1229
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15 posted 2000-10-13 11:57 AM

congrats temptress! beautiful lines here

Robert Joseph
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16 posted 2000-10-13 12:39 PM

Whisper your dreams in my ear

Temptress, whispered dreams...could love find a more peaceful avenue. Lovely thoughts in your collection of verse.

Robert Joseph

Jhonbus
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since 2000-10-12

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17 posted 2000-10-13 12:51 PM

Well that was nice to read, Although not designed as a poem, it did the same job - conveying feelings. And what's more, it conveyed your feelings over a long period of time. very interesting read!

brian madden
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18 posted 2000-10-14 05:38 AM

great idea Tempress and it makes an excellent poem congrads on the 1000 th post.

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

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19 posted 2000-10-14 06:28 AM

Congratulations, Temptress
Enjoyed reading these lovely lines
May you grace the forum with many, many more
Liz

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

20 posted 2000-10-14 09:58 AM

Good morning Temptress,
First let me congradulate you on the 1,000th. And then let me congradulate you on the writing that you have done. It's a pleasure to read.

Bill

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

21 posted 2000-10-14 10:00 AM

Sorry Temptress,
That's congratulate, with a "T"

Bill

snowpants
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22 posted 2000-10-15 03:47 PM

Hey, Temptress! Congrats on the 1000th, and excellent write! I love it!!

sp

Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

Aimster
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23 posted 2000-10-15 10:14 PM

Temptress!
C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S!! This was a supercool poem! Excellent lines you got in here. Beautiful images of love. take care.

amy

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