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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
In out of the car Little child, Mum and Dad have to go far Work, so important Even though baby tears are evident Into the creche you go We have to go with the flow Riches and night life So much time we have to spend For you our little one As you grow you have to fend On your own we understand We have a good time While your baby tears go unseen |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Such a very sad poem...and then these are the same parent's that wonder where all the time went and wonder why when they are old their children never come visit...you gave me much to think about in this piece. Powerful work~ |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Daniel JD-It is sad when a parents wants are met over the needs of their children to feel loved and secure. You've captured the feeling of parental selfishness well with this poem, nice piece. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Butterfly, Thank you so much. Yes, it is real out there. So many children are hurting. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Gemini Yes, how true. If they could only read the mind of those little ones. |
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