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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989


0 posted 2000-10-11 08:20 PM


When you realize that it is over
theres nothing left that you can do,
you can't reach in and touch a heart
that's already been divided in two.

Where do you go from there
how do you start over new?
How do you keep a heart
from turning sad and blue?

When all that two have shared
is no longer held so dear
how do you move ahead,
how do you get passed the fear?

When a heart has turned to ice
and the future is left unclear,
how do you love again.....
how do you get there, from here?




On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.

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Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
1 posted 2000-10-11 10:46 PM


A very excellent piece of writing GS, you wrote from the heart in this and it showed beyond a shadow of a doubt~
Gemini
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA
2 posted 2000-10-11 10:57 PM


Gentle Spirit-This is beautiful, questions I've also wondered about.  I felt this one.
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Louisiana
3 posted 2000-10-13 01:14 PM


I don't know. But I like your poem.
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