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Marsha
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0 posted 2000-10-11 06:08 PM


A Touch Of Heaven

A ngel

T his is
O our time, belonging
U tterly to us, so
C ome soothe my aching soul
H old me in your tender heart

O ur bodies resting from passions race together
F eeling our skins damp with lovers dew

H olding, and being at one togther
E cstacy builds again the fire
A lways burning, ever new
V essle of delight
E mbrace me
N ow

               Marsha


              
      



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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2000-10-11 06:10 PM


Very nice Marsha...I like this TOUCH of heaven...James
Butterflies_dont_cry
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2 posted 2000-10-11 06:51 PM


A very creative piece. Nice writing Marsha  
Ariana
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3 posted 2000-10-11 06:53 PM


Marsha

Nicely done - very sensual.

             Ariana

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4 posted 2000-10-11 07:01 PM


Very nice acrostic.  A touch of heaven....nice way of describing when two people feel the same for each other.  
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5 posted 2000-10-11 07:34 PM


James, thank you this was inspired by Mark's the other day. I thought I'd give it a try, and I enjoyed it very much. Although I think I've got some way to go.
                  

Butterflies dc thank you, it sort of wrote itself. I thank you for stopping to read it.
                     


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6 posted 2000-10-11 07:39 PM


Ariana, what a pretty name that is, thank you for stopping by and reading this. Mmmmmm yes I suppose it is sensual.
                              
                 Marsha

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7 posted 2000-10-11 07:46 PM


Mark my friend, thank you, you say the nicest things. I know it's not in your league but then it wouldn't be, and thanks for the inspiration with your beautiful acrostic. Yes a touch of heaven  exactly describes the feeling between two who share.
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8 posted 2000-10-14 01:17 PM


beautifully penned, lovely poem

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

Marsha
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9 posted 2000-10-14 07:07 PM


Brian, thank you for taking the time to reply, and I'm happy that you liked it. I do too, but that's because it describes something rather special.
                          Marsha
                             

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10 posted 2000-11-09 08:37 PM


I enjoy acrostics...not easy, but fun...a true challenge...I must dig some of mine out...

enjoyed the read, oh little MM...


Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
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11 posted 2000-11-09 08:40 PM


marsha--

this is a very beautiful acrostic!
you have an amazing talent that your
loves shines through. simply wonderful.
i am enjoy these love poems that you post
very much. they make me S M I L E! kudos
to you Mushy Marsha  

Take care.
Amy  

Marsha
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12 posted 2000-11-10 05:52 AM


Kari, have you been digging about in the vaults love? I actually enjoyed doing this, although I wouldn't like to do too many. You know my brain isn't up to the constant challenge.  

Amy, thank you sweet, this is indeed a love poem, and I'm pleased it made you smile. Amazing what love can inspire you to do, although you know that, for your own work is truly inspired of late.

Take care
               Mushy Marsha
                      
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Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 11-10-2000).]

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