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Whispered Wind |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
A nights whispered wind that has traveled for years consumes my breath away of moments I wish I new. A silent brazing on my lips kissed gently from the breeze that awakens my lost soul and rages for the one I see. A silent touch upon my breast that gives heat to my cold heart allowing the light of angels in securing the moments art. A nights whispered wind that beckons to my soul to finally let me free and love to conquer my all. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
MG~ I liked........  -SEA |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful thoughts Michael, beautifully descriptive sentiments ... just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely! I really like this: A silent touch upon my breast that gives heat to my cold heart allowing the light of angels in securing the moments art.  |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Wow Michael what an expressive piece this is. I was swept away with its beauty. Juls |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A silent touch upon my breast that gives heat to my cold heart allowing the light of angels in securing the moments art. A nights whispered wind that beckons to my soul to finally let me free and love to conquer my all. ============ ahh my gentle poet ... when ever you write with the wind beneath your wings ... you sweep us all away with your poetic breezes... i have noticed many times the winds influence in your poetry... this gem..proves my point... take care my poetic prince me |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
So tenderly written Michael, this is an exquisite weave of heart and soul~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely written and so pretty.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Michael beautiful poem I love the flow of it and the whispering winds blowing through the night into your soul beckoning you on and opening your heart for something new. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
 Like this a lot~S~ |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Michael, this is wonderful!!! When I read this, I feel like standing on top of a mountain and letting the breeze cleanse my soul. I picture peace and complete tranquility in this one. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Thankyou everyone for all of your kind comments, it makes it worth everything to me knowing that you liked it......... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful....well done. I really enjoyed reading it. Charisma |
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