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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
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0 posted 2000-10-11 02:01 PM



What happens when the birds stop singing?
What happens when the sun stops shining?
What happens when the air stops blowing?
Do I bury the memories of all that is good?
Do we forget the yesterdays of our first kiss?
Do we run to a future filled with emptiness?
What happens when the times run out?
What happens when the Oceans dry?
What happens when the stars stop twinkling?
Do I give up the arms that once held me?
Do I forget the warmth of your heart?
Do I see my reflection without you?
What happens when my tears stop falling?
What happens when my heart stops beating?
What happens when your not there?
Do I change the soul so deep with in?
Do I transplant a heart that cannot mend?
Do I find a way into the maze?
So many questions to a what if situation
so please just make me want to fix it
and not throw it all away.

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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2000-10-11 03:15 PM


Rosebud1229~ this sounds as though you are going through a very difficult time, I hope all is well with you.   -SEA
Dee
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since 2000-08-19
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Queensland, Australia
2 posted 2000-10-11 03:54 PM


A sad story, written so sweetly. Hope you are ok.
Take care,
Dee

Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2000-10-11 04:51 PM


Sad, but brilliantly written. I love inquisitive (SP?) poetry.   That which you have described has a familiar ache for me.  
Rosebud1229
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4 posted 2000-10-11 11:27 PM


thanks Sea, Dee and temptress I think I'm just a little on the sad side today I'm alright, but sometimes I do wonder these things, thanks for caring
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
5 posted 2000-10-12 02:12 AM


I see the mood of the upcoming season is already playing with you.  Your feelings and thoughts are reflected well in this one.  Now come on and be happy and lighthearted today.  Tis a new sun that rose this morning.
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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6 posted 2000-10-12 06:30 AM


If it does happen, worry about it then and hey hon it may never happen and if it did it's not going to last forever because there is always a new sun, moon, night sky and rebirth everywhere...you have expressed yourself well and written this superbly...well done
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
7 posted 2000-10-12 10:06 PM


thanks Mark and tracie, and your right Mark maybe it's the changing of the seasons' or two many fool moons I don't know I guess we all go through these what if's at times and tracie I know what you mean but it's in my nature I guess maybe it's sometimes I want more than what I'm recieving at times, I'm want of those people what can I tell ya!
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