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Thinking About The Passing Of Time
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Thinking About The Passing Of Time |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Thinking About The Passing Of Time I’m pondering the passing of time, a novel idea I know. When one grows to an age of understand that time does come to an end, it’s time to wonder if you have spent yours it well. This invisible taking away of life, time becomes so very clear and tangible to the naked eye when the past lays out for you to peer back on realizing just how far you have come. Who of you can admit that as your age climbs that number table you wish things could of been a little different, a little easier, calmer, maybe longer. I admit if I could “only” but it was all a matter of timing and unforeseen occurrences. It’s amazing, I at this moment watching the clock on the wall, cheap as it is and man made at that, can make such a commotion in our lives. Yet try to live with out the darn device and see were it gets you! I am hoping that in the after life time is only but a memory, for the here and now is gauged on nothing but time. Funny thing what can come to mind if you have the time. BY, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Cerenity~ Depending on what you're doing time can be your friend or your worst enemy. This is a very thought provoking poem.  -SEA |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Cerenity, life and time go by quickly, its up to us to use them both wisely. You have made me wonder if I have done that and what I can do better. Thanks. Dee |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Yes yes...thought provoking, and well thought out. I liked this and its message. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
"This invisible taking away of life, time becomes so very clear and tangible to the naked eye when the past lays out for you to peer back on realizing just how far you have come." a beautiful and wisdom-filled poem. i tip my hat off to ya girlie. awesome work! take care. amy p.s. the above verse was my favorite! "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
If only we knew where we were going as well as where we've been. . . Wonderful my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Awesomepiece and worth much thought in pondering the message carried with it. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Time is such an interesting subject...and this a thought provoking poem. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi to all of you wonderful souls, I am truly sorry I did not get back to this sooner but I was given a most awesome gift to day a bigger, fast, funner, COMPUTER yes thats right im in HEAVEN right at this very moment, not that I will not be totally lost for awial but im SOOOOOO happy, wow time consuming though. Anyway now maybe I will have MUCH less prob's and can get down to some real reading here at passions and not fall off the planet every time I want to reply or something. Thank ALL of YOU for your loving replys having a major birthday can make you think about spending your time more wisely or at least think about it. Once again thank you all and I will be looking forwords to all of your work happily soon. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You know, I have no clocks and calendars! I only count on one thing, the next day! No, seriously, this was very insightful, and I am glad I didn't miss it! Kathleen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ The ticking and tocking is maddening at times. Wonderful thoughts to ponder. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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