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Sven
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0 posted 2000-10-11 12:50 PM


My Gentle Maiden, the time has come
To open your arms and fly to the sun
To find that one with love so deep
He waits for you, your heart to keep

Kind and tender-hearted you are
Your love outshines even the stars
This is the love that you share
Even though he is not with you there

Gentle Maiden, I set your heart free
To go where it has so longed to be
To ly to the one who shines like the sun
My Gentle Maiden, the time has come

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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inot2B
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1 posted 2000-10-11 01:02 PM


Only a true love can
set free the Gentle
Maiden.

Irish Rose
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2 posted 2000-10-11 01:11 PM


Very nice, Sven!

Kathleen


Rosebud1229
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3 posted 2000-10-11 01:15 PM


there is the warmth of the morning sun that shines upon the gentle maiden and she sings with a new song holding on with her heart. Beautiful poem Sven
Temptress
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4 posted 2000-10-11 05:53 PM


This is just wonderful.  

juliet_2u
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5 posted 2000-10-11 06:42 PM


Sven I'm speechless. This is so beautiful and tender. I just really don't know what do say and you know that's not like me, lol. What a gift of love this is. My heart is mingled with joy and sorrow.
Tender hugs my friend,
Juls

Sven
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6 posted 2000-10-11 07:17 PM


inot2B. . . yes, so I've been told. . .thank you my friend. . .

Kathleen, thank you. . .  

Rosebud. . . indeed. . . can you hear it?

Temptress. . . thank you my friend. . .

Juls, thank you my friend. . . your words do mean a lot. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


JamesMichael
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7 posted 2000-10-12 08:49 AM


"Kind and tender hearted you are
your love outshines even the stars."
I would say that you are very much in tune with the beauty of this woman...and your appreciation outshines even the stars...James

Cerenity
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8 posted 2000-10-12 09:19 AM


Hi Sven,

This is lovely friend, you have such a way with words, they always touch my heart, so very much a treasure you are.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


Sven
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9 posted 2000-10-12 09:57 PM


James, thank you my friend. . .    your words are always welcome. . .

Cerenity, thank you so much. . . I am indeed honored to speak to your heart. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Waverly917
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10 posted 2000-10-13 03:30 PM


You always write such beautiful poetry, I love it all!

Abra

"So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains
And we never even know we have the key."
-Already Gone, The Eagles

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