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Victoria
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0 posted 10-11-2000 11:34 AM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Victoria

come bathe with me in hot springs of the earth
splurging sinfully as if in a bordello
amongst magnolia trees and holly
relaxing to the strings of a cello
come bath with me in our symphony
where natural minerals heal and invite
within rocky mountains majesty
and skies of lavender bright
healing in hot pools of the earth
where grazing mountain sheep roam
the wonderous feeling of rebirth
beneath darkness and heavens starry dome
rejuvenate our love in hot springs
the vitality of mind..body and spirit sings




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- Paul Valery (1871-1945)
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1 posted 10-11-2000 04:01 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Lovely descriptive writing...sounds like a plan...could be a rendezvous...James
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2 posted 10-11-2000 04:07 PM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

Such a beautiful piece, Victoria. How could any man refuse!
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3 posted 10-11-2000 04:09 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

mmm..very nice.   Sounds like a fun visit to me. Your descriptions make me want to sink right in.  


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4 posted 10-11-2000 04:27 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

Thank you James..i didnt think anyone liked this one..thanks for sending it around again..

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5 posted 10-11-2000 04:31 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Sounds perfect after a long day! Very enjoyable read~
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Well..i wouldnt mind having an invitation myself haa...thank you Dee..

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Thank you Temptress..since i have a pinched nerve today..i could use it haa..
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thank you butterflies dont cry..so glad you peeked in...

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
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Wonderful comparisons Victoria ... what better place to rejuvinate one's love than in a "rejuvinating spa" ... very creative!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
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thank you kit..so glad you enjoyed..

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
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splurging sinfully as if in a bordello
amongst magnolia trees and holly

Victoria, There is a soulful, earthy energy to the passions in this piece, I enjoyed greatly. The above mentioned lines stood out in my mind, as both magnolia and holly weave a bit of magic for me.

Robert Joseph

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Thank you Robert..your comments inspire me to keep writing..looking forward to reading more of your poetry..

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)
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Very lovely and I love the mention of Magnolia trees.  My favorite tree for sure.  I loved this from beginning to end.  
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How enchanting...such a picture you paint
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Thank you Mark..i wrote another about making love under a magnolia tree..i was in Vegas and a pic of a magnolia tree was on the wall and it inspired me to write a poem after i lost all my money haa..nothing else to do in vegas when you are broke haa..

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
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Thank you Paula..im going have to set out and look for a hot springs now..im sure theres one around here somewhere haa..

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)
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May all your hot spring adventures be fulfilling...James
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