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The Camel's Trek
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The Camel's Trek |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Masturbated--maddingly-- mumbled moan of monotone... a simple sigh so sad to me-- my spirit sighs in search of home. A moment--GOLDEN--me, alone (glimpse of eyes in search of free) falling...elasticity... Anything, to call my own. A grasp of straw in break of back-- oases, shimmer in the sand... foot-fall of the camel's trek-- in quench of thirst of all I lack. Depart! The path of caravan! Release these chains of love's regret. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well this one sure isn't lacking at all. Where there is the knowledge of what you see as your weaknesses there is also the first step in coming to grips and dealing with it and not waivering to the temptations as much. You will find it in you if you look deep enough my friend. I KNOW you will. You are in there somewhere...just keep knocking on those internal doors and you will find you. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
VEEEERY Spicy Serenity. Well done my little pepper. Rich |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
my spirit sighs in search of home. A moment--GOLDEN--me, alone (glimpse of eyes in search of free) falling...elasticity... Anything, to call my own. ==================== Ummmm .... so ... why didnt ya just post my picture here...  cause ya KNOW ya hung a MIRROR!!!!!! *sigh* ...  can i just say....I KNOW.... and then you will know ... me loves ya me |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this was very good miss sen |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you much...and JM---I knew that I could count on you to get the allegory of the imagery....not laughing out loud...oh no. It is a futile thing to attempt a relationship on your own.... Love ya muchly, all...and thank you. |
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