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Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 2000-10-10 11:03 PM


Today I climbed up in a tree, like in the days of old,
When I was just a youngster,
in thoes days I was so bold.

I picked myself an apple. Yep you guessed it. It was green.
I planned to eat it anyway.
Couldn't resist that polished sheen.

I climbed up as high as I could go. Then I settled down to eat,
that green apple I had picked,
propping up with my feet

I let my mind drift away, back to thoes carefree days.
When all I had to worry about,
was the latest craze.

And now a memory oh so sharp, reminded me of another time,
the awful cramps I'd suffered then,
struck my stomach and my mind.

I had to go..I HAD to go, and down I began to climb.
But when my feet touched the ground,
I knew what I would find.

Too late, too late, would you believe, the mess that I was in?
I'm too damn old for this sort of thing.
I'll NEVER try that stunt again!



If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

© Copyright 2000 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
1 posted 2000-10-11 07:57 AM


Ya know - I was (stuck) up in an apple tree yesterday - pickin' & eatin' the best ones... and the strangest thing happened... I looked up and saw someone else there doin' the same - That was YOU???..
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
2 posted 2000-10-11 04:24 PM


Now this was just cute.   Sounds like something I've promised to do lately. I swore that soon I would find me a tree to climb again.   Nice work!  
Kitty**
Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA
3 posted 2000-10-11 04:34 PM


Nan..I KNEW that was you in that tree...
Sorry I didn't have time to chat.
How long did it take before you HAD to go..?


Temptress..Go climb a tree but don't eat
green apples..;-)

Thanks to you both for reading!
Cheers,
Kitty


If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

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