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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Cracks on the sidewalk Seed germinate into stalk Green! Nature into play Sounds of steps, horns near the bay Paper tucked, hands in pocket Winds, cool and crisp, wets the tired socket Money today, pension day Doors closing, it is evening Cats screaming, bins smelling Sirens, lights, a fall on the sidewalk Head covers the stalk Morning sun, time to walk Green perhaps another day Seeds are plenty No place to sow for continuity. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Life isn't always easy but if you know when to plow the fields and when to sit on the side then it is much more bearable. Wonderful write and WELCOME TO PASSIONS |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Well writen verse Daniel. Gives me something to think about. Dee |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Brought to mind scriptural reference, and I did like the implications of that...I would quote it, but my memory sucks. I'll return later, should I have a brainstorm. (don't count on it...LOL..) And I do like this, welcome to the forum, m'friend, where 'seed' falls on fertile ground... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is real and true to life. A very good description of the things we may see or feel everyday but do not notice. I enjoyed it. Kathleen |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Daniel--I like the way you notice the small things...and find lessons...welcome to Passions! In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I enjoyed reading this. Welcome to Passions.  |
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