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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-10-10 04:39 PM


Let me express my passions
in the shadows of your embrace
within the moonlight of your eyes
my heart doth softly race

I feel your lips touch my dreams
kissing away my tears
your voice softly whispers
within the dark of midnight clear

The rain is the scent of roses
cascading an umbrella of hue
indian sunsets ..mandarin orange
drape the skies of corn silk blue

Earths canvas is a kaleidoscope
with passionate thoughts of you


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                           Reach high, for stars lie hidden in your soul.
                           Dream deep, for every dream precedes the goal.


[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-10-2000).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-10-10 04:45 PM


Victoria~ this is lovely... -SEA
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2 posted 2000-10-10 04:49 PM


Victoria, such lovely pictures you paint with your words.
Dee

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3 posted 2000-10-10 05:48 PM


thank you Sea..and for taking time to read  
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4 posted 2000-10-10 05:54 PM


Thank you Dee..happy you enjoyed..
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In the winds of Cherokee song
5 posted 2000-10-10 05:56 PM


The rain is the scent of roses
cascading an umbrella of hue
indian sunsets ..mandarin orange
drape the skies of corn silk blue

Earths canvas is a kaleidoscope
with passionate thoughts of you

Now listen hear you....lines like the above could really make a man weak you know.  Very beautifully written and so much taken in.  

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6 posted 2000-10-10 06:01 PM


thank you Mark..I just noticed where you live in Texas too..im in Amarillo..a beautiful autumn day here...the wind chimes are playing a song haa  
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7 posted 2000-10-10 07:42 PM


so beautiful....you describe it so well.
enjoyed reading it.

Charisma

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8 posted 2000-10-10 08:09 PM


thank you Charisma and for taking time to read  
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Victoria, soft and enchanting, serenely romantic. Very much enjoyed.

Robert Joseph

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In the winds of Cherokee song
10 posted 2000-10-11 09:50 AM


What do you know, another Texas poet.  I was beginning to feel that I was the only one.lol

I am glad that you are having Autumn days there because here in Houston we still have GREEN trees and lots of concrete.  The weather is getting nicer though...just perfect for Autumn but alas no leaves changing yet.

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11 posted 2000-10-11 09:53 AM


Thank you Robert and I forgot to say Welcome to Passionate forums..I am sure you will love it here as I do...  

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12 posted 2000-10-11 11:04 AM


I always love how you weave so much color into your poetry - Loved this Vicky  
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13 posted 2000-10-11 11:52 AM


Thank you billy bob.haa..whats this vicky stuff haa..
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