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SEA
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0 posted 2000-10-10 04:14 PM



Time to slow down
I'm in need of repair
my heart is aching
my soul in despair

So sad I've been
and I'm in need of touch
Love me tonight
I want you so much

Say all the things
you know I need to hear
let your mouth linger.......
I have no fear

Place those kisses
where they need to be
I want your hands
to become a part of me

Over & over touch me
in places different or same
bring to my lips a ~SIGH~
.....the whisper of your name

Oh how I love you
hold me close as we let go
a welcome release
of emotion overflow.

-SEA-

© Copyright 2000 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Dee
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1 posted 2000-10-10 04:24 PM


Sea, this is so beautiful.
Dee

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2 posted 2000-10-10 04:36 PM


Sea this is a magical poem, I really like this.
             Marsha
  

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2000-10-10 05:50 PM


I will hold you in my arms
kiss you till the tears run dry
I will give to you all my charms
just to hear one more little "sigh"  

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4 posted 2000-10-10 05:55 PM


Dee~ thank you.  

Marsha~ I don't think I've had a poem be called magical before, thank you, that made me smile.  

Mark~.........*SIGH*............ just what I needed.......

-SEA

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5 posted 2000-10-10 07:00 PM


*sigh* ....love is sooooo beautiful...



Charisma

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6 posted 2000-10-10 09:26 PM


Charisma~ yes,love is, now if my husband would just get home............. -SEA
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7 posted 2000-10-11 01:07 AM


this was very beautiful....n i want it toooooooo *pouts like a lil kid* .......like marks lil comment  very cute  
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8 posted 2000-10-11 01:51 AM


Whoa....steamy piece SEA  
great writings....wonderful first read for me tonight...I don't think it'll get any better than this  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



JamesMichael
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9 posted 2000-10-11 06:00 AM


"Let your mouth linger..
I have no fear."
My style of kissing...let it linger..James

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10 posted 2000-10-11 08:12 AM


SEA~
Girl ... you're sizzling here !
~*Marge*~


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11 posted 2000-10-11 08:21 AM


Simply lovely SEA - Just beautiful!!! Bonnie
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12 posted 2000-10-11 08:51 AM


Absolutely beautifull.  I can only wish for the same for myself.  I liked this alot

Keith Mullin

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


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J_A_F~ Thanks!  

Tracie~ Steamy is good....thanks much  

James~ Mine too!  

Marge~ Thank you!  

Bonnie~ Thank you for reading  

Keith~ I'm glad you liked this  

-SEA

Robert Joseph
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14 posted 2000-10-11 09:54 AM



SEA, desire painted nicely in the brushstrokes of your words.

Robert Joseph

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In the winds of Cherokee song
15 posted 2000-10-11 10:00 AM


I am in need of more "sigh"s
So I came by to once more say
I will take soaring in heaven's skies
As once more we begin our play

Rest you atop a moonbeam's trail
Caress you with a feather's touch
Breezes of lust filling your sail
Passionately holding you in my clutch

....Well if he is the jealous type then I would say DON'T invite him to read your poetry.LOL.....

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RJ~ thank you very much!  

Mark~ sweetheart, he has me, so he can't be too jealous......besides, he gets all the lovin's   -SEA

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17 posted 2000-10-11 10:15 AM


*bows*

This is gorgeous!

...  o  O  (And leaves much to the imagination, hehehe)

*winks*

*bows*


A man in a bubble is a man in trouble.

Wilfred Yeats
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18 posted 2000-10-11 10:21 AM


Well - besides getting a taste of the sensual SEA - and a wonderful taste at that! - I learned how Mark ran his count up over 3000 - he replies to the good ones at least twice!

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In the winds of Cherokee song
19 posted 2000-10-11 10:39 AM


Wellllll maybe not ALL the lovin!!!!!  Not when you are on the range he don't LOL....Thank you for allowing me to play my friend.  Sometimes this cowboy needs his spurs spun a little.  HUGS TO YA


Wilfred....only once in awhile but mostly it is called NO SLEEP!!LOL


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20 posted 2000-10-11 11:41 AM


Natelan~ thanks  

WY~ Sensual SEA, oh yes, I like that....Sensual Susan......yep, that works!!   thank you.

Mark~ ok, so maybe not ALL.... you have definately stole a corner of my heart.  

-SEA

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In the winds of Cherokee song
21 posted 2000-10-11 02:37 PM


6' 2 1/2"....enough?  GOOD.....thought so !!!! and yes a size 12 boot
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22 posted 2000-10-11 03:38 PM


Mark~ Ok, that is very tall....my Dad is that tall.   Size 12?!? -SEA
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23 posted 2000-10-11 04:01 PM


Tom Jones couldn't have said it better, this is fabulous!  (If you don't know who he is, I'm really showing my age here  

Kathleen


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24 posted 2000-10-11 04:08 PM


Irish Rose~ Yes, I know Tom Jones......I guess that's dating myself, but so what, I love his voice....thanks for stopping in to read.   -SEA
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25 posted 2000-10-13 02:06 AM


Darlin girl what a sensual delight...I am so glad I had the chance to go find this
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26 posted 2000-10-13 07:59 PM


I do like this one, great work!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

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27 posted 2000-10-13 08:04 PM


enjoyed this  work of art SEA including all the comments that followed  
~~softly smiling
Maureen

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