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Slow Dancing |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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He held me in his arms so tight, slow dancing. I floated on a cloud of mist soft light romancing. His eyes looked deeply down into my soul. I could feel my heart weakening, losing control. The first his lips kissed mine was pure delight. I wished we could have stayed embraced all night. We walked hand in hand under the light of the moon. The wind began to play a soft sweet tune. The stars were our soft light for romancing....... Our feet never touched the ground as we continued ~slow dancing.~ On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Gentle Spirit, this is a lovely way of looking at something that is sweet and romantic anyway. Well done. Dee |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
GS, oooo I really like this, so soft, so romantic  Well Done "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Applause!! I love this! Kathleen |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
GS~ this is wonderful......very sweet. -SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"Slow dancing, swayin' to the music. . . no one else in the whole wide world. . . " What can I say? I'm a walking book of songs. . . this is great. . . soft. . . superb. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
so romantic, superb... Charisma |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Beautiful tender writing...this is a dance that you wish would last forever~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Little curtsies and big smiles. *s* Thanks so much one and all. On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
So sweet and tender. Enjoyed this very much. Welcome to Passions. |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
this is sweet. Keith Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Gentle Spirit-The feeling of feet never touching the ground, makes me want to get out and catch a slow dance myself. Very nicely done. |
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