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0 posted 2000-10-10 03:20 PM


The Arrival Of Autumn


The shimmering frost’s
Lacey designs fall subtly
On dried leaves and browned grass
In the sun’s crisp early light

There is a frosty chill in
The afternoon’s brisk wind
Breath’s delicate cloud of mist
Vanishing in dance into the air

Drying leaves clinging to the
Trees sway in a rhythm of color
Warm orange, yellows and reds
Moving in a ballet of graceful beauty

A new season arrives once more
Fall springs to life with vigor
As winter slowly stirs to life
Awakening from a year’s slumber.




~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

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1 posted 2000-10-10 03:27 PM


Nice poem - grumble grumble - it's raining right now... you realize that don't you??? I wan't my summer back...

LOL - cool matching the colors too!  

Christopher

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2 posted 2000-10-10 03:31 PM


Chris - Ummm.. I brought some autumn to cheer to you??? (It's all in the way you look at it..lol )   Thank you for stopping in .. I'm glad you liked it.
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3 posted 2000-10-10 05:44 PM


This would have to be my favourite time of year. It seems strange to read your poem when we have left Autumn behind. Lovely work.
Dee

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RP~ I love this. Autumn is my favorite time of year............... I feel blessed when it rains.........   -SEA
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5 posted 2000-10-10 05:57 PM


a beautiful autumn poem..love it..
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6 posted 2000-10-10 06:03 PM


So when are you going to make the leaves turn colors here?  They are still summer green and the darn sky is still so blue.  Well, I guess that ain't bad now is it?  If I didn't want to see the Autumn that is.  Lovely verse and "THANK YOU VERY MUCH" for making me miss it even more.LOL....you know I loved it my friend.
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7 posted 2000-10-10 10:00 PM


Dee -  I'm glad you liked it   Here in Pennsylvaina autumn is just starting   Thanks for stopping in.

SEA -   Thank you for stopping in. I'm always glad to see you

Victoria - Thank you for the nice words  

Mark - Umm.. Well.. I will personally have a chat with Mother Nature but I can't promise anything   hehe.  I'm glad you liked it  



~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

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8 posted 2000-10-10 10:29 PM


My favorite time of the year. A very wonderful reminder of it. Thank you.

Kathleen


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9 posted 2000-10-11 03:00 PM


Irish Rose - I'm so glad you like it. Thank you for taking the time to stop in and read

~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

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