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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
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Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-10-10 02:00 AM


today was     /in suspense/

   w    a tching
    water  go down a dra i n/ever live like this?

i th in k  i can re l a---te

i think i can re_late

so still ..so sti ll
all-the-while-unappreciative-of the mundane rape


theres a  weird world outsidemydoor

its got insincere walking talking  parrot s s s
of varying taste and denial//s

and theres mo/re thought than sound

theres more thought than  s ou n d d

just ^^__what_do you think    when theres more

  thought_tha n _sound




"you can have my isolation..you can have the hate that it brings
you can have my absence of faith..you can have my everything"

"so impressed with

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insect
Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

1 posted 2000-10-11 11:47 PM


I was just think_ing how we_ird this really i_s what I w_as th_ink_ing.
Is this weir_d thin_king
Just a thought!

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
2 posted 2000-10-14 01:16 PM


maybe it is because I was at a Radiohead concert last Saturday but this reminds me a lot of their lyrical style, a very interesting poem, and yes I can well relate to the disjointed state. excellent piece.



"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

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