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juliet_2u
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0 posted 2000-10-09 10:42 PM


Gifts Of Love

I celebrate you,
For you have changed my world,
Healed my heart with rainbows,
Of magically colored swirls.
Painted me sunsets,
That soothed my every fear.
Danced with me in waterfalls,
That washed away my tears.
Walked with me in quiet darkness,
In warm and gentle rain.
Held my heart so close in yours,
It forced away my pain.
Talked with me till sunrise.
Craddled me till dawn.
Whispered softly to my soul.
Sang to me sweet song.
You are the one,
Who looked straight into my soul.
You put my happiness,
Above your very own.
For these gifts of love I thank you,
And everything you do.
But first and most of all,
For the gift of being you.


This is to honor a very special man in my life. And even though and ocean seperates us for now, he is never far from me, because he's always in my heart.



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-10-09 10:47 PM


Juliet~
This is so special !
I can just -
Feel The LOVE !

I'm sure he will love it too !
Wonderful to see your heart smile !
~*Marge*~


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Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2000-10-09 10:49 PM


Wonderful Juliet ... so rhythmic and flowing. Your love and devotion shines through these lines brilliantly.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

insect
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3 posted 2000-10-09 10:51 PM


Waters may separate both of you
But I'm sure both of your hearts
are sailing in that ocean.
Pretty poem!

Victoria
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4 posted 2000-10-09 10:51 PM


I am sure he will love your beautiful poem..enjoyed..
Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2000-10-09 10:55 PM


This was a beautiful testimonial of love.  He will surely love it.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.

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6 posted 2000-10-10 12:39 PM


Wonderful Juls. . .

It's nice to have someone in your life like that isn't it?

Excellent. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
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juliet_2u
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7 posted 2000-10-10 12:59 PM


Thank you to each and everyone of you. Your replys mean so much to me. I would normally have spoke to each one of you seperately but I just can't at the moment so thank you for understanding and thanks for stopping in.
Juls

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