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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989


0 posted 2000-10-09 10:22 PM


You give me strength, you give me courage
you are my sun on a cloudy day.
You give me love, you give me hope
you are the rain washing my troubles way.
Your always there whenever I need you
you never leave me with a doubt.
You've shown me the meaning of love,
it's your love I can not do without.

When your holding me in your arms
I release all of my hidden fears,
quietly you listen with your heart
as you gently wipe away my tears.
I don't know how I have found you
I only know that I have been blessed,
you have set my spirit free
and my soul has been caressed.

My promise is to love you
through out eternity
and always shall I be yours
forever, faithfully.



© Copyright 2000 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2000-10-09 10:32 PM


"I don't know how I have found you
I only know that I have been blessed,
you have set my spirit free
and my soul has been caressed."

Welcome to Passions Gentle Spirit! What a lovely first post, such tender and romantic thoughts ... hope to read more!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Denise
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2 posted 2000-10-09 10:33 PM


Very lovely, Gentle Spirit! Please check your email for a special Passions' welcome!  

Denise

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2000-10-09 10:36 PM


Thank you both so much for the warm and wonderful welcome!  I am enjoying my visit here in this wonderful place.  
Marge Tindal
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since 1999-11-06
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
4 posted 2000-10-09 10:41 PM


GentleSpirit~
Welcome to Passions - the greatest family
of poets on the Internet !

Enjoyed your first post and look forward to more.
Hope you'll enjoy reading the works of the talented poets here !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
5 posted 2000-10-09 10:45 PM


Welcome to our family = which will now become yours!! I enjoyed your poem and look forward to reading more from you. And I love your name! Beautiful.  
Victoria
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since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869

6 posted 2000-10-09 10:49 PM


Welcome to passions..truly loved your poem..
juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
7 posted 2000-10-09 11:04 PM


Welcome to Passions! This is an excellent first post as I'm sure the others to follow will be also.
Juls

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
8 posted 2000-10-09 11:08 PM



GentleSpirit-
   Welcome to passions.  You're gonna
   love it here.    This is a wonderful
   first post, and I look forward to
   reading lots more from you.  

   -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


MMoonchild
Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715
PA
9 posted 2000-10-10 12:25 PM


are you my "gentle" friend? Loved this post!

welcome...
~~soft hugs
Maureen

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
10 posted 2000-10-10 12:33 PM


Beautiful thoughts so nicely stated...James
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
11 posted 2000-10-10 07:05 AM


Wonderful entrance to passions, this is a most beautiful and loving piece...hope to read more of yours soon....well done
Welcome to the family  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

12 posted 2000-10-10 10:10 AM


Welcome to Passions. This is a great introductory poem, with a wonderful style of simplicity and meaning.  Look forward to hearing more from you!

Kathleen


Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho
13 posted 2000-10-10 12:10 PM


A beautifully written poem - a spectacular first post!  Welcome to Passions!



The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G.


Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
14 posted 2000-10-10 12:24 PM


Welcome Gentle Spirit. . . here you will find others just like yourself. . .

This is a wonderful poem. . . superb. . . looking forward to more from you. . .



----------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Irie
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
15 posted 2000-10-10 01:20 PM


Well, at the risk of sounding like a broken record, Welcome to Passions  
How wonderful to have someone that you charish so much.
You've expressed your feelings well Gentle spirit.


~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
16 posted 2000-10-10 01:53 PM


Welcome to Passions!!!   This is a lovely way to start out and I do so look forward to seeing more of you here in the blue pages.
Gemini
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA
17 posted 2000-10-10 02:28 PM


Very tender piece written from your heart, I liked very much, welcome to Passions!
Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

18 posted 2000-10-10 03:34 PM


Again, thank you everyone for this warm and wonderful welcome, and I do so enjoy looking forward to reading more here as I get more familiar with each one of you and your words.
This truly is a lovely place here.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.

Dee
Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia
19 posted 2000-10-10 04:03 PM


Welcome, Gentle Spirit. Your name seems to suit your style. Lovely work, looking forward to more.
Dee

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
20 posted 2004-05-16 08:29 PM


oh...look what i found...
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