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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i've been having a little writers block lately...hopefully it's over... ~Heart~ among the ashes and the dust the wreckage and the rust lies the left overs of our life burnt to the ground my heart was found still beating but not bleeding my heart was torn apart til the end and from the start my soul is long dead killed at start gone at end from here and forever always but never i'll stay here and try to find the peices of my heart love not kind Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very expressive, Nik. I liked the part about trying to find the pieces of your heart. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes sometimes love does not seem kind when only one wants to tango...James |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Nik baby girl...I will always love you...hugs darlin child |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
A wonderful read. I think you've got your inspiration back! Dee [This message has been edited by Dee (edited 10-10-2000).] |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
A very moving poem. I enjoyed your moving words. Somewhere out there a new love awaits, as long as your heart wants to be loved. Daniel J D |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
thank you all for your replies...i'm glkad you likes it but i really dont think i'll be writing much now...no inspiration.... Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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