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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Forever entrenched Visions of hands wrapped Childhood plays on misty days Tears flowed the day you went away Laughter,and candles Bright lights, darkness Songs of happiness Face full of crumbles Flowers, many a pile Stones that portray a smile Of a child lost forever Broken and hurt I shiver As I try to turn around I cannot play and see you again Treasured though are the memories Bruised to the knees We played in the rain So young, you left Bald,like me you closed Eyes to the night Hands held so tight Morning came, birds singing You kept on sleeping As the tears flowed |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I am so sorry, for your loss. Continue to write it will help. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've expressed yourself well in this sorrowful piece Daniel, straight from the heart. I am so sorry for your loss. Welcome to Passions, and I do hope you will share more with us. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Daniel, your poem is beautiful! Welcome to our family. Please check your email for a special welcome.  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Daniel- Such sadness here. I'm so sorry for your loss. My heart goes out to you. You have expressed these feelings well.  Welcome to passions. I lookforward to reading more from you. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Welcome to our world...and please know if you need to just talk all you have to do is email me...I listen very well. |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
I know the feeling, it hurts alot. Great expressiveness.. BirdeeB "So don't judge me by my failures, only by my dreams" SR71 |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Welcome...and if you ever need anyone to talk with, feel free to contact me. I've lost a lot of close friends in the past few years. *hugs* Very well written.  With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"stones that portray a smile" this is great welcome to Passions! Kathleen |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Wow Daniel what a moving poem. Your sadness is so well expressed here. My heart goes out to you. Also welcome to Passions. Juls |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD~ What a very touching render. Welcome to the posting side of Passions. You'll fit right in nicely. You squeezed my heart with these thoughts. Very well-written, in my opinion. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Daniel, Welcome to the Passions family. May you find many friends and much comfort here. The loss of a child has got the be the worst pain a person could feel. I'm so sorry and I hope that you are able to find comfort. You and your precious one are in my thoughts and prayers. ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Daniel, I feel the pain of your loss through your words. Such passionate and loving writing. Very nice work. May our prayers comfort you. Welcome to Passions! Looking forward to reading more. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Daniel your words brought a sombre mood over me, but in them are beauty and love. Keep writing, and sharing, it really helps. You are very welcome here. Dee |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
To vlraynes Many people out there are in such situation. This poem is theirs. Thank you |
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