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vandana
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0 posted 2000-10-09 07:01 PM



When night ends,
I see the light
Coming through my face,
Standing here
At this place,
Thinking
When the darkness will fade soon,
So that my eyes will shine again,
And let the light come
Into my life,
I see love standing on the door,
I see rain coming again,
When all the darkness faded,
And open up my eyes,
To see the light again,
Watch the sun brightly
Into my eyes again,
When all the darkness fades quickly,
I'll able to see the light again,

message:

Light into my eyes,
And light into yours,
Don't close your eyes,
Because you will see only darkness
But no light into your heart and mind,
Light is only thing
you can see the dreams
And love you made,
light,



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Nan
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1 posted 2000-10-09 10:24 PM


Let the sun shine in... Good philosophy..
Mike
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2 posted 2000-10-09 11:53 PM


Nicely written Vandana... your poetry always is a ray of sunshine.
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-10-10 08:10 AM


VanDana~
What a delight to find your lovely thoughts
here upon my day.

*Hugs* to you !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



vandana
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4 posted 2000-10-19 11:01 AM


Thank you,Nan!!!!!!
   Thank you,Mike!!!!!!!As always.
Thank you ,marge.For your kind words.

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