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Heart and Soul
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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Heart and Soul Amy M. Kennedy It's two AM as I stare at the wall The night always drags on much to slow Summer nights are over and now it is fall Amazing how in just 3 months love can grow Your love has made me complete I am finally whole As I happily remember the sound of your heart beat I want you to know...I love you heart and soul Brisk autumn rolls in, leaves red and gold The night air is cold and brisk My lonely heart feels alone and old But loving you has been worth the risk Cold and alone I shout out to the night Does anyone hear as I shout to the moon You are my angel love, my ever-guiding light Your stays with me are always over too soon I hang onto the day when we'll be together And no more will we have to depart Closing my eyes I pray, we'll last forever All the love I have for you is in my heart Distance makes the heart grow fonder I think that's how the saying goes How is it possible this love can get any stronger One fine day, we'll have no more woes Look at the star-filled sky As they twinkle down upon you and me And no NEVER will I say good-bye Forever you and I will be...just watch and see  "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Amy this is BEAUTIFUL and you've done a excellent job on the rhyme... perfect flow.... and the emotions are expressed with a poetic passion your heart and soul indeed do shine in every line wonderful writing girlie ... your angel inspires amazing things in you  later-madly-in-love-gator me |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I LIKED IT!!!!!  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Lovely heartfelt poem Amy I hope your dreams come true and you're together forever never apart. HUGS Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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natelan Junior Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 34Escondido, CA, USA |
*bows* This is absolutely incredible... I try to re-examine most of the poems I read, but because of the effect that your words have on me in this particular work, I was forced to stray from my standard ways of opperation... Ok, I'll admit it; I almost cried... It really got me to thinking about my soulmate, who by coinsidence, is also named "Amy," and it made me yearn for her presence intensly... A shame, then, isn't it, that she lives in Philladelphia, PA and I live in San Diego, CA, eh? Hehehe, oh yes, boohoo @ me, j/k. Congrautlations on your relationship, I know how fulfilling true-love can really be. *bows* A man in a bubble is a man in trouble. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
reading your words, I must agree, How wonderful that love can be... I have hear how you shout out to the moon, and wish for you, that you will meet him soon, hope that your ever-guiding light, help ended your cold and lonely night. Wish you all the happiness in your love. Charisma |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy this is lovely, really beautiful. I like this a lot, and you've done an excellant job of writing this. Well done Marsha |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Im with you compleately Aimster. Hold on to that love, though it be so far away. truely a wonderful poem. Keith W. Mullin Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Thanks to you all for such wonderful replies. You all touch me so deeply when you reply with your beautiful words and inspiring wisdom...a special thank you goes out to keith. i think you and i are on the same wavelength love ya amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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