How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #10 Archive
 What Will She Do??
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

What Will She Do??

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Victoria
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Ascendant
since 08-12-2000
Posts 6020


0 posted 10-09-2000 04:56 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Victoria

Softly the rain cascades her skin

whispers of love flowing within

gentle eyes.. lavender blue

drowning in reflections of tides untrue

What will she do?

Steam scented raindrops

on pavement of moonlight

What will she do?

dressed in chantilly white

Rain cascades the curve

of her hips..he kisses the raindrops

from the softness of her lips

What will she do..if it stops raining?

and he fades within the mist

a mist of lavender

lavender blush blue

What will she do?



                           Reach high, for stars lie hidden in your soul.
                           Dream deep, for every dream precedes the goal.


[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-09-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Victoria - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 06-07-99
Posts 7296
America the beautiful


1 posted 10-09-2000 05:06 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

That was beautiful. The images were great and I could really see this. I also liked the hint of sadness at the end.

Elizabeth


Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near...
hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 11-16-1999
Posts 31622
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


2 posted 10-09-2000 05:10 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Beautiful thoughts...James
Victoria
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Ascendant
since 08-12-2000
Posts 6020


3 posted 10-09-2000 05:30 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

Thank you Elizabeth...so nice of you to peek in today..
MMoonchild
Senior Member
since 07-13-2000
Posts 1723
PA


4 posted 10-09-2000 05:41 PM       View Profile for MMoonchild   Email MMoonchild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit MMoonchild's Home Page   View IP for MMoonchild

loved this and the lavender blue thoughts

always such beautiful images Victoria
~~smiles
Maureen
Victoria
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Ascendant
since 08-12-2000
Posts 6020


5 posted 10-09-2000 05:42 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

thank you James...nice of you to stop by  
Victoria
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Ascendant
since 08-12-2000
Posts 6020


6 posted 10-09-2000 07:14 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

thank you Mmoonchild for your visit..
Aimster
Member Elite
since 02-19-2000
Posts 4367
Charlotte, NC


7 posted 10-09-2000 07:57 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~Victoria

Beautiful!!! Some truly amazing and inspiring lines flow through this. I could see the images in my mind, as if I was really there. If this is a sample of your work...you can count on me reading a lot more.
Take care.
~Amy~

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"

Victoria
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Ascendant
since 08-12-2000
Posts 6020


8 posted 10-09-2000 10:37 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

thank you so much for the nice compliments..i dont have one certain style..but write in many different styles..i also write alot in dark passions ..thank you Amy..glad you liked..
insect
Senior Member
since 04-22-2000
Posts 1001


9 posted 10-09-2000 11:11 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

All right
I like this very much
Nice flow and style for you
And please tell me what will she do
Victoria
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Ascendant
since 08-12-2000
Posts 6020


10 posted 10-09-2000 11:15 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

She will cry and go on with her life as she did before she met him..hoping to love again...thank you insect..for peeking in.
Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite
since 08-04-2000
Posts 2916
Wilmington, Delaware


11 posted 10-09-2000 11:37 PM       View Profile for Wilfred Yeats   Email Wilfred Yeats   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Wilfred Yeats's Home Page   View IP for Wilfred Yeats

You got to me with this one - and did it very well - I'm glad she's not giving up ~S~

~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning.

~ Billy Wilder
Victoria
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Ascendant
since 08-12-2000
Posts 6020


12 posted 10-10-2000 09:26 AM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

but i think she did billy..thank you for peeking in..
juliet_2u
Senior Member
since 07-23-2000
Posts 1132
North Carolina


13 posted 10-10-2000 10:13 AM       View Profile for juliet_2u   Email juliet_2u   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for juliet_2u

Wow Victoria this is incredible...The images I see here are breathtaking.
Juls
Victoria
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Ascendant
since 08-12-2000
Posts 6020


14 posted 10-10-2000 10:20 AM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

Thank you Juls..im so glad you like it..
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 08-26-99
Posts 46297
displaced


15 posted 05-16-2004 08:31 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

wow!
Mysteria
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 03-07-2001
Posts 19652
British Columbia, Canada


16 posted 08-21-2005 03:01 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

I loved the images you posed in this one, and also the outcome, as life goes on.  Missing your poetry Victoria.  


"Carpe diem, quam minimum credula postero" ~ Horace
"Live Like You Were Dying" ~ Tim McGraw

Victoria will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #10 >> What Will She Do?? Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors