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Teardrops Of Love |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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As these pearls of rain dance ever so softly from crystal eyes releasing in free-form of past sorrows and regrets beauty cascades like waterfalls hopeful streams tease and play in the loving air of your charisma dear bringing peace to my heart once more in salty hues of a love song's harmony reflections of your gentleness live on how deep you have touched my soul floating in my eyes' watercolours sensuality at it's most beautiful teardrops of love refreshing showering my spirit with only you *By Melissa Honeybee* The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 10-09-2000).] |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Well done, and beautiful presentation! Way to be creative!!!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Melissa! So nice to see you, and this lovely offering... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Melissa~ Hi!! Not only beautiful in presentation but also your words are exquisite. way to go girl. so nice to be reading your work again. take care. amy  "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"teardrops of love refreshing showering my heart with only you." Beautiful thoughts Melissa...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful Melissa. . . just beautiful. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you so much everyone for replying to this "experiment." It was fun to write, but also a challenge. It was Marge's creativity that inspired me to write a "teardrop" poem The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, Wonderful writing and formatting my friend. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Honeybee... you have weaved a sweet one here needless to mention how you have presented this poem is splendid! Coco |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Oh, my ! How totally beautiful ! What a lovely, lovely presentation of such gentle thoughts. It's absolutely PERFECT ! Your phrases are saturated with true meaning and the format speaks of creativity that I just KNEW you had in you. Sweetie ... you just ROCK BIG TIME ! *Winking* at ya' gal ! Love you and your wonderful friendship. Durn ... I'm glad you stayed ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Melissa, this poem was beautiful and so heartfelt. The presentation was wonderful, I enjoyed it immensely. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Melissa, this poem was beautiful and so heartfelt. The presentation was wonderful, I enjoyed it immensely. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful in both presentation and wording Melissa ... I enjoyed your sentiments in this lovely piece, nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Melissa this is so very beautiful. Everything about it is spectacular. And I agree with Marge, I'm soooo happy you stayed. Juls |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I love the poem and of course the teardrop..it is just lovely.. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you everyone for liking my teardrop! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Melissa- wow...this is awesome. perfect in every way. beautiful words and wonderfully formatted. i just love this one. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Excellent poem and excellent presentation |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
stunningly beautiful. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ohhhh I do so love a "SHAPE" poem and especially when it is filled with words as wonderful as yours. This was beautiful in content and format and I do know of the inspiration that Marge offers as she too inspired me to do the same. Loved it and so glad to see you still here. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This is wonderful work Melissa! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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